Ello, awesome storyline, is this really the end? It CAN'T BE! You guys are going to do a sequel right? Please! Ya, I'll stop ranting now. Please do a sequel?
uh oh...its a good thing you've already started running cube, cos that is NOT what I call and ending!
So, Kao and Selinde are related? And started the twin speak thing? *shudders*
and I thought that your descriptions of Bethune were lovely.
and LMAO at Elrond actually having Kao tied and gagged!
Umm, the blunt spoon and the raven are back in force. And I can't believe it is months until I get the next bit!
*I swear I shall be down to biting on my knuckles cos I'll have gnawed off ,y nails and fingers waiting.
Good chapters!
Cathy.
ps i found it a little comfusing when you kept switching from inside Bethune to outside wihtout a break. If you could stick ## or something in between the changes of scene I'd find it a lot easier to follow.
Alternatively I'm probably the only one who has the problem and ignore me. lol
They're finally free! YAY! LOL. I would have liked to see Elrond reunite with his sons but that's okay. ) The fic is more about Selinde and Kao anyway. I hope Selinde kills Noor, the bastard. *Pardon my French, even though I don't know French but whatevah. You know what I mean.* Keep up the good work, post more soon!
FINALLY! Took Elrond long enough! EK! I WANT TO KILL NOOR WITH MY OWN HANDS!
I think it was a little bit harsh of Selinde to talk at Kao like this, I know she has been hurt beyond measure, but nevertheless, she is her sister... Or was it a ruse to throw everybody out of her tent to go charging after that abomination of Noor on her own... Silly Elf!
You know how wicked you are! Injuring Legolas like that... Argh!
BUT... I've never felt so good as ehen Kao plunged the dagger deep into Fynns heart...YEAH; RIGHT!
OH girls, I love each and every of your twiste brain windings... I simply love them... *sigh*
*waves* HEy cube, songbird, I've just taken a nice little stroll to our next psychiatric ward, and you know what? They stll have two little, nice, cozy cells, just waiting to welcome you. Everything will be alright, you'll see... NO more evil men torturing poor girls and ellyth, and nobody will force you to out-cliffie or out-evil other author's, you'll see...SH, everything'S fine...MWahahahahahahaahahhaahahah
*blinks*
Didn't know insanity was catching
*shrugs*
ah well, will ask if there's a third free cell... Come to think about it, white suits me...
*cough*
YOU EVIL, EVIL...
AGH
*STRANGLES NOOR AND FYNN, POURS BOILING OIL ON THEM, STARTS TO STRIP THE PEELING SKIN OF THEM,GOES OVER TO DELIVER THEM FROM THE MANHOOD!*
ehmm... *takes valium* yes... I think I'm alright again... for now... until the next great, stricking, mind and heartmreaking chapter of yours *evil gleam in the eyes*
Hey guys... you're kidding, right? You didn't... This filth only beat her, didn't he? Only beating... No... Nothing else yeah? He couldn't... No... Not Kao... Saes! Tell me I'M just imagining things... He didn't...YOU DIDN'T! AGH! *reader fallen from the chair, clutching her breast-reader killed by a heart attack-May she rest in peace...
Oh my gosh that is so said, what is happening to Selinde. If I were her friends I would not leave her either. I hope they get rescued soon! I came straight here to review after reading this ) Can't wait to read 17!
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