That was so sweet.

aw! i officially worship you! im your #1 fan! please let me lick your boots! please get in touch with me oh heralder of great newsies fic! goldengirl923@aol.com

Wow, I really like this story. Touching, truly. I loved the way the rainstorm was 'ment' for them, the way it beckoned them to do everthing it did. Kudos to you and your wonderful story!

Aw...so cute.

Fine work, fine work.

Jack is such the charmer. Heh.

*Reads for about the 15th time.* Wow. I so, so love this. So much. The imagery is beautiful; I especially love the image of Jack as an "exultant rain god". And, just... gah. Everything about this story was just beautiful and whimsical and sweet and fluffy and wonderful. Wow. *Hugs you again.*

P.S. This was definitely a help during the A.P. exam. Every time I got to a question I wasn't quite sure of, or got stuck on an essay, all I had to think was "Jack and David kissing in the rain" and all was well. :)

*huggles fluff* i LOVE fluff! and Jack/David fluff the best!! yay!!

super! the imagery was awsome.

I think "aww," is the only word for that. It definitely feeds my new-found love of Jack/David, for sure. MM mm mm. (MM mm good, like the soup? Maybe.)

Anyway, adorable and very well written, as always. :)