absolutely loverly.
clouffie pawns all.
[le F A V Es it]
x Kawaii Eyez x

Wow, this was total coolness! :D

Aw, adorable. I've been wanting to read this for a while but never got the chance to. They kissed, I was mentally going, 'Squee!' and then the date part I was saying, 'Aw!' aloud. This is adorable, good job. I juss love Clouffies.

That was great ! i wish it never ended, i got so into that story.

Is that the end?

Is that the end?

I really love the idea of Cloud/yuffie, they are so cute together. Good job.

This was cute! ^_^ I was bored and found this through a livejournal community, and I loved it! ^_^ I don't think I've ever seen a Yuffie x Cloud pairing before, but this was done REALLY well!

"Mako Mutant!" Haha! That was my favorite part! ^_^ Great job! I'd love to see more from you! ^_^

more need more

Omg teh kawaii ^_^ Cloud x Yuff is always the cutest, and you really brought out the innocence of that couple. You made the fic pretty balanced, though I was still giggling the whole way through. Your writing skills and grammar are very good, and this is an overall superb fanfiction. Be proud. ^_^
YAY FOR CLOUD X YUFFIE ^^ Write more, okay?

Very good. It's getting rare to see a story here where the author doesn't bash the characters that he/she doesn't like in it. It's the sign of a mature writer. Keep up the good work.

Oh!! Mega-kawaii! You should write more Clou/Yuffie fanfics!! So far, there are only two that I have foudn, one of them, yours. Great job!!

That was so undeniably cute! A Cloud/Yuffie fic is a rare find indeed. This is the first I've ever read of them. You did good job with characterization. It was believable and pretty in character in my perspective. Nice work. Thanks for posting this piece :D I especially found it amusing when they tumbled down the hill hurling insults at one another XD
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Great Story! Yuffie and Cloud all the way can ya read my yuffie and cloud fic please?

Wow!
I LOVED this story too!
Nicely done!
Nicely written!
Nicely thought up and planned as all of your stories are!
GReat stuff!