Oh, cute end. I liked that. A very non-romantic conversation followed by a kiss. Cute, as I said.

and she ** slapped him. the end.

I loved the couple in the beggining! they're not boring at all! :=)

hey, great story! you have a wonderful style and the reader is taken away of the changing feelings. great work, I'd love to read more about this!

I loved that fic. It was just so cute but romantic.

Aw...FAVES !

Has Trouble incurred the wrath of the mighty Holly Short? I need to know!!

Hey, Pine and Larch aren't half bad. Loved the story. I'm a fan of the Holly/Trouble 'ship, even though there's nothing really in the books that even hints that they would, could or should like each other. Just kind of those 'what if' things. Anyway, great work. Cheers.

--Stromboli

aw, FLUFF

This is really good. I don't like H/T, but I can deal with anything so long as it's written well.

That was a great one-shot! A lot of stories about T/H are sappy, this was good.

that was good can you right more chapters

I agree with Holly Rox. Please rite a sequel! tis a good fic.

I agree with the Author's Notes, but Troublt seems like a good match for Holly. I'm not a big fan of A/H or R/H.

You pulled this off quite well- it was very sweet. BTW, I LOVED 'tales from the LEP'.