well to start with ur first fanfic is wickedly awsome luv the way u wrote each of their emotions i would really luv to read the other chapter of this fanfic if ur makin one well in my opinion u were great keep it up n i hope to read more of ur works
zack

OMG...wow...
I love FFX/X-2 and this story is just...wow need I say more?

I thought it was a great fanfic. You explained things really well. The characters had personalities like in the game. Keep workin' at it! Good job!

Aww! Its so cute! I love it! CONTINUE!

"One word FANTASTIC".
I really enjoyed your version of my fav game.
the story was well discripted,and i think you did
a great job of capturing yuna's feelings and just how she might have been feeling on the pilgrimage.
it was great to read and i really hope you carry on with this exellent story .
(ps you have great potential as a writer,well i think so)

Wow... that was great. The characters weren't OOC at all, and it made sense. That's your first fanfic? You're kidding, right? (my first was terrible compared to this -__-) Anyway... I'd never really thought of Yuna as this, but now... how you personified Yuna seems quite plausible. Great job!

That was great keep writing! MORE, MORE! this was so much more interesting than a lot of the other one I have read in my lifetime . Keep up the good work.

I thought it was great! You did a really good job :D I loved the way you reasoned Tidus's actions and thoughts, and I loved hoe you reasond Yuna's as well. That was awesome! I throughly enjoyed it. I hope you write more!

--VaLiCe.

:D

Oi, that was beautiful. Lovely details, you made Yuna and Tidus so in-character without making this a ridiculously sappy fanfiction...

The details were delicous, Yuna determination and 'insignificance' were marvelously written, and Tidus actually acts like he does in the game...well, my only my opinion, but it seems that you agree too.

I hope you continue, and it's a depressing fact that I'm the first reviewer...even though this was just published today ^__^;;

Good luck, thank you, and PLEASE continue! I would love to see how it turns out!

Noodles

very good fanfic. i love how it shows the same timespan from both yuna and tidus's point of view. looking forward to the next chapter.
p.s. kimarhi kicks @$$

OMG that was so nice! I loved it! You so have to do more stuff!

OMG! That was GREAT!! I just recently wrote my first fic too! And of course its Tidus/ Yuna lovliness! You kept the people in character really well...I love your descriptions. I love how Tidus and Yuna are down to earth and real. But one (tiny little) red flag: why is Yuna depressed?