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me
2006-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseluv ur fics, just one thing":HG does not act like that at all
sweetmidnight
2005-08-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseOnce again, this story was ridiculously funny! One of my favorite parts is when Batman, Superman and Green Lantern got to the sauna and...well...you know. I bet Superman was regretting having, "X-Ray Vision." Well done on this story!1
Agent Michael
2005-01-31
ch 1,
abuseCongratulations! This was the first story I chose to read from this website. I really really enjoyed reading this story. Instantly, it became a favorite. I'm glad I chose this one.

I enjoyed how the characters were developed in the "down times" and when they're not needed for action. Flash was the silliest character who got the ball rolling. It would be an interesting sight to see if Shi and Diana would actualy allow themselves to be pampered in a spa.

This almost reminds me of the Christmas eppisode of Justice League last year where they all went off to enjoy the holiday.

I could have done without the email dialogue back and forth with Batman and Oracle. It didn't really do much to move the main plot storyline.
Flatlander Jr
2005-01-09
ch 1,
abuseThat was hilarious. You should have ended it with the girls walking in on the guys, though. That would have been perfect!
Kyoko Kasshu Minamino
2004-09-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was so retarded...and so FUNNY!
XD XD!! I've read you last few and I like the pointless humor. Ish funneh, ^^.
BM/WW RULES!
Ja ne!
LivingMyLife
2004-07-30
ch 1,
abuseUmm...don't know what to say except for I LOVED IT!
Angelic Temptress
2004-06-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseA lil' strange at times, but funny. I love the end...
silverbluehues
2003-11-30
ch 1,
abuseNice!
Birman
2003-11-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseOOps, forgot to say: update soon please!
GS2aholic
2003-08-03
ch 1,
abuseAnd this was good too! Hilarious! Really!

“Run away now little bird-girlie. You will be mine.”

*snorts* Hilda... if I ever meet one I will run for my life.

(Another Favorite story... pat yourself on the back!)
Crazy Queen 101
2003-07-20
ch 1,
abuseGreat story as usual. Pretty much it.
Willow-Bee the Cat
2003-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was really funny. You need to write another story!
Centuri Eagle
2003-05-12
ch 1,
abuseAn amusing abuse of super powers:

“Hey, while you’re at it, can you zap these towels too? I like mine steamy.” :-)

It think it’s funny when you write how open to suggestion Wonder Woman is after a massage:

“yes, you are Bambi . . . Prance through the field little Bambi . . . prance . . . and frolicking . . . Bambi is thirsty . . . you skip over to the stream. And, um, oh! It’s a birdie . . . he says, ‘Hello Bambi!’”

“m . . . flowers . . . m . . . stream . . . Hello birdie . . .”

Lois - “Oh for cryin’ out loud!”

Also a nice touch is the addition of the two hardest working flunkies in all of DC - Zan and Jayna. However, the absence of Gleek (a very special superhero in his own right) is sorely felt. :-)
Susan
2003-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHilarious! Great job.
Aura Starfire
2003-05-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse*snickers* that is great! I hope you do another one soon, these really make me laugh ^^
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