Certainly interesting, though Yugi seems a bit OOC. Look foward to more. Keep writing!

cool...are ya gonna update on this storie because its really interesting. i love the way you described the palace, wonderful imagination. keep up the good work.

Very nicely done. Your discriptions of the palace interior were vivid and well written. Hoping to see more of this.

That was interesting. . . .is this one dead?

A really good fic so far! I love it, the plot is very original! You definitely have TALENT! Please keep writing! Can't wait!

I think it is quite good so far. But...I have to say, your other story is a little better. This one is still really good though. ^_^

very good i like! now i like both of your stories? p.s. is bakura and the millenium items going to be in hear?

Interesting. I want to know more about this. Please continue.

How dare youput up a new story and and and not update the other one!! *sobs* But it still was good..omg..now theres TWO stories I want to read. DAMN YOU. *hyperventalates*