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| the toaster 2004-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI believe, that out of a movie full of interesting people... pyro is the most interesting. Yes... great wording toaster... THis was excellent. It annoys me this is one shot... but there's not much I can do. Excellent story... just fantastic! |
| MerchDoyle 2004-04-02 ch 1,  | abusenice stroy! |
| Pyromaniacal Llama 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. I love it. |
| Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'... 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGood! Well-written, & captivating... (except the swearing)... Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!! |
| Malvolia 2003-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse"This guy was Satan’s teddy bear, if he could be classified as a stuffed animal at all." This. Was. Great. An insightful, fascinating combination of character study and "what happens next." Your characters are extremely IN character and believable. Simply smashing. I've made a note to come back to read your follow-up fics. Malvolia |
| SYNB 2003-06-01 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I praise thee! |
| FireStarter8 2003-05-31 ch 1, | abusecool story |
| What's Their Name 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abusegreat fic. nice to see someone who doesn't incoporate a mary sue into the whole John turning. going to read the next two. |
| selectclientele 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseaii, this is *good*! and it's pyro! *claps* yay! |
| Anon Entry 2003-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written, a great take on Pyro's thoughts. I love the lyrics integrated in, too. I'm gonna stick this on my favorites list, just so I can look at it from time to time. You rule! |
| thisisnicole 2003-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh, that was a killer story! |
| miss toad 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat characterization, absolutely perfect. I loved everything about this-you write so very well! Can I beg you to write more with this? Oh, well, am anyway. |
| Beth Winter 2003-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood work! I like the simple narration, and Pyro's inner thoughts. Your Magneto was dead on, I could practically see him saying his lines :) |
| Ammunett 2003-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this story! After seeing the second movie I was convinced that Magneto and co were not 'evil', just did things differently, and reading what you've written had been a breath of fresh air. Any plans to do a sequel at all? It would be nice to see the Brotherhood in a different light...plus more John is a MUST! :) |
| I Carry A Basket 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story! :D I love the part where St. John makes fiery wings and what he says after. Prettiness. |