That was a GREAT way to end the chapter, very good bit of a 'hanger' if dun mind my saying! :)

Wait ... isn't she like, just over two years old? And she can already mimic a baby voice? Whatever, this fic is very cute and ...plotsy? Interesting i guess is the word. :D Good job!

AWW! this is so cute. I love the whole thing. Its such a great story that i dont really mind that draco is sweet and kind and adorable. *sighs* so cute.

that was cute! tho, the rating is probably a T not M, wuteva...i liked it!
Th12

it's very good

The writing is okay, but I am having real problems with the credibility of the plot.

I just find it really hard to believe that:
a) as a mother, you would just let the father of your child take her away for a few days at a time while you have no contact with her and with no notice beforehand (the very first time he left with her, I was like - WHAT?! Why would you let that man just TAKE her away with no objections?)
b) as a child who has lived with her mother for three years, she would be willing to leave with a strange man and live with him for a few days at a time, WITHOUT her mother, and seem so at ease with him. Even if she recognizes his face from pictures, it is very different from actually spending time with a person.

Those two points kind of make the story really hard to get through just because it complicates everything and makes the situation hard to believe and/or read.

Regardless, the level of your writing is much better than some horrific things I've seen out there. I'm no grammar police, but quite honestly sometimes when I've seen one too many "defiantly" in place of "definitely" or the wrong use of "too/two/to", I simply go back and find a different fic to read.

So thanks for allowing me to read this far without tearing my eyes out! Keep up with the good writing, you just might want to plan out your plots a bit better next time! :)

AW! you should make a squil !

Bad Ginny! She didn't tell Draco he had a daughter till now? That's not very nice.

I like your story so far! I had a t-shirt with the phrase "Anything boys can do girls can do better," on it. I thought it was funny to read it in your story!

haha! im never letting you come near me with that thing of yours. well it was an awesome story. i loved it! ur a great writer.

awesome! i love it...so it's ron and lavender then? and not ron and luna?

this is the same chapter isn't it, except the very ending? ok then.

ok its good...um i loved the proposal and hermione having the baby! one mistake i saw was u switched the name from harry and hermione saying sirius james potter to the nurse saying remus james potter! a bit confusing. well i love it still!

oh! no! well i still love it. i didn't expect any of that chapter.

oh well i didn't see that coming. i love it.