plz update soon...its a beautiful story...Hayami and Kino forever^^

Always tense and exploding with emotion - like spams -involuntary muscles contracting and releasing, and we never know when. It builds a nicely-formed, tension-filled mood, with all the somberness (and, yet, sexuality) of a very precise, very sticky, situation. In other words - you pull it off nicely. It's been SO long since I've read this - what? 2, 3 years? I had no idea that it was still on my Story Alert list. Good thing they don't delete stories according to their activity dates! lol

Thanks for the addition - it was unexpected, and nice, especially for one who's on vacation! I hope you do write more on this, but, if you don't feel inclined to (for the next 3 years...hahaha), ever chapter is so fufilling and well-done, it's fine on its own.

:)

Hi!

ssg recommended this story to me, and I've finally got a chance to read and review it. She was right, this is REALLY REALY GOOD! I really love the intimacy the characters share, the choice of language is great, and it makes me feel tingly. Tingly is good!

Anyway, she also mentioned you've been out of commission and you might not actually get this review, but to all of you who are reading this review page and trying to decide whether or not to read this story - READ IT! IT'S REALLY AMAZING!

Take care!

~ pia Z ~

You have to write more of this, finish this.. Unless it is already finished. I would like to see what happens now after all that they have done..together. *ahem* Seriously though, this could be just another fanfic, but the way you write--how you portray such an emotion--it turns it into an art. Great job. :)

Wow, awesomely awesome! One of the best fics I've read--anywhere! Some parts had me holding my breath, it was so good. Really intense and believable; loved the inner conflicts (and the sex). Why aren't there more chapters?!

Your going to make me cry. You have not updated in 6 months, PLEASE UPDATE I'm dying here.Ahem sorry but please update soon.

man this is great...ain't never read one like this before! the way this is written just kinda' floored me, with the way Kino acted in the series and all...man you should really write a romance book if you can write this good in other ways!

superb writing for all three chapters, and quite frankly this last one has me blushing from head to toe

Heh . . . you should write paperback romance books. ^_~

holy crap!!

holy crap!

holy crap!

honestly, ms. bobbie, you're one of the best writers on this here fanfiction.net! this chapter was just 'gorgeous gorgeosity'! i'm just dying. lush with character nuances and itty-bitty details that just make these people SO real...

what's a girl like you doing in a place like this?

honestly!

holy crap!

ssg.x.

Wow . . . Hayami, man, slow down there! But still, after a couple of weeks like that, I guess I'd be on edge too . . . Many kudos to Kino for being as understanding as she is in this chapter! *claps appreciatively* Or does she get mad at him in the next chapter? I hope not . . . O.o Once again, a beautifully written piece of work! You really have an incredible writing style - your works so far have been a thoroughly enjoyable read. ^.^

Keep up the excellent writing! Please update soon!

Tenika Dargan

Great story! *cheers appreciatively* I'm really looking forward to the next chapter; your writing style is really very good. I agree with Rai Dorian, too - it's a nice break from all the M/H pairings out there - I really just don't think they were meant to be together, and it kind of disturbs me that so many people want to pair them up.

Anyway, great story!

Tenika Dargan

Hey this is really good! Please update soon!

wow...imagery...oh...my...god...

i am goo.

sidewalk serfer girl x

One of the most pulling in stories I'v ever read. I hope there is a following chapter up soon.