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| NeoNails 2004-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseHey, good one-shot. i'm not usually a Mel-Ter fan (and _definately_ not a Dana-Ter fan ^_^), but your story was great! It kinda compared Catwoman to Ten, and vice versa. And it also informs you 'bout the letter- the show was kinda vague about that 'cuz there was no possible easy way to show it- which was interesting to almost _everyone_ who watched the show. Good 4 you, CATgrl |
| Seer99999 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It was really good. |
| chibi Nataly 2003-11-05 ch 1, | abusewell, I like it, haven't really seen batman beyond lately but, when i saw that episode i wanted him to read the note! i mean ... dana/terry wouldn't really work out for alot of reasons and terry/max well... they don't really seem like the romeo and juliet... as in they don't really show emotions beyond really close friendship so i think melony/terry would be the best couple... anywayz good job!. w/ cartooni luv , chibi nataly |
| Dark Wolf Girl16 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseyou should turn this into a terry/batman and melanie/ten romance. there arent many out there. so email me if you do |
| Sandoz 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI like it. The Terry/Melanie and Terry/Dana relationships were covered quite well, and the ending was very appropriate. Good job. |
| YT1 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHey, I like this. I do like the way they handled the note business in the series - that Terry didn't read the note, because in the cartoon there was no graceful way to have him read it - but I like this little alternate universe thing you've done. And you've obviously got an eye for the details of Terry and Dana's relationship. A couple of problems, though. One, there are some spelling and grammar errors you might want to check over and fix. Two, Melanie KNOWS that Terry knows that she's Ten. In "Dead Man's Hand" he saw her going into a police cruiser and she saw him watching. Also, in "Once Burned," when she climbed in through his window, he called her "Ten" sort of bitingly. This is good, but it could use a little work... |