Really great story. It's humorous, but that doesn't detract from the storyline. I'm pretty sure that this story is finished, so why don't you switch it to completed?

If you don't know how:

1. Login
2. Under 'Publish' click 'My Stories'
3. On the right of the story click 'Edit'
4. Beside 'Status' change it from 'In-progress' to 'Complete'

Keep writing!

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BUNNY

Loved the story - your take on events, characters,your writing.. But most of all really LOVED Sirius. And howlers. I was ROFLMAO sirius-ly ;-)

it was a good story thank you

this was awesome

If Sirius is still an illegal animagus, then why did he transform at the station in front of everyone? Or is he registered now?

This was fun to read. I loved Of Western Stars and was so glad to find a continuation of that story. I can so picture Sirius being all ultra protective like that. The only thing was, some of the sections that were repeating incidents from the book got a little boring, even though I know they were important to the plotline.

i think this chapter has been great although i think you could have added more to sirus reamus's and harry's christmas time to together such as harry's reaction to presents maybe more emotion between the three of them since they have been seperated for a while . other than that i loved this chapter

i lovededed this story... gonna go check if theres a sequel... if not... then you should write one.

that´s amazing
i love this story

AWESOME

Great story, great ending. Keep it up!

I was pretty confused about the sausages. So they remind him of vernon's fingers??

Nice fic!

You did a really good job, I enjoyed it immensely.

This is a gorgeous story. I really like the way you've matched it with neutrals, and the way you don't detail the experiences covered in canon - it makes it a really good read.

That was an awesome story. You kept true to neutral's way of writing, and...well...it was awesome. Keep up the good work!