Your story is very good. I like the plot and how everything ended up. The romance between sesshoumaru and kagome was a little weird. I didn't necessarily like the fact that kagome was suck a push over. I mean, any order she followed without so much as arguing. I mean, for a girl who was described to have spirit she didn't really show much of it. She always just followed any order that was given. Even if the order was from Inutaisho, whom she did not like at all, she obeyed without any argument. I mean if someone I did not like told me to do something I would certainly say, quite vehemently to go to hell and that I wouldn't do his bidding. Especially if said person ordered me to marry someone. I would be like hell no. I wouldn't stop at that I would tell him that I am not a life that can be manipulated and that to some people's surprise I do have feelings.
Just the kagome with your story and the regular kagome didn't necessarily match up. It was a good story don't get me wrong but the romance between sesshoumaru and kagome didn't really develop really well. It was more so like in the 'early developing stages' than being fully a romance. I mean they could barely stand each other. Not the I secretly like you but I'm going to act like I can't stand you or the I secretly lust after you that I'm denying it by arguing with you not stand you more of the I just can't plain stand you. That also got me a little confused.
You are a very good writer do not get me wrong I did enjoy your story it just felt like you left something to be desired. But all in all it was a good story. Please do not take my feedback as super hugely harsh and I'm sorry if it came off that way. I wish you good luck on any other stories you create. ^_^~buh byes

Y'know, scarily, despite his bad tendencies in this fic, I acutally like Naraku. And that, scares the hell out of me...XD:P

Wow. Let me try to write you a review for 15 chapters, probably about 100,0 words?
Anyways, let me say it again. WOW. This has to be one of the BEST AU stories I have ever read.
I am an avid reader, by the way. My eyes are basically tearing up from reading this all day.
I loved how everyone was human in this story but how Sesshoumaru still maintained his persona. I absolutely loved how Sesshoumaru was all possesive...it was pretty hot.
I really enjoyed how there wasn't throat gagging fluffyness...it had just the RIGHT amount of romance...teasing the readers here and there...
Naraku's last line was pretty ironic in a funny way.
I also loved how the story ended. GREAT JOB!
I will be looking forward to read your other works.

Ah, the gang's back together agian. Maybe this is what Kagome needs?

a very good fiction. I love then end !

Love it Love it Love it!! :)
I've read this story MANY times and I STILL Love it. :D

I like this story so far but it seems that the attatchment Sesshoumaru has formed for Kagome through Rin is a bit too preemptive, and that it should have developed more before he felt anything to do with liking her. Otherwise, I like it.

I do really enjoy this story, the plotline was very good.

i love your stories. i can't believe that this is happening. how does anyone come up with this things...my mind can't even form like yours or my friends...i enjoy reading your stories. they are awesome^^

so long...

so...long...*has tears in eyes from staring at the computer for too long*

haha sesshomaru wearing jewelry is funny...sorry not the time for this is it?

i...can't...stop...reading...so good...*twitch twitch*

wow...why is naraku kagome's father? isn't being captured bad enough?

cool...