Reviews for Round Perdition's Flames Mass Market Version

Reviews For: Round Perdition's Flames Mass Market Version - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

SithKnight-Galen 2008-05-26 ch 13,	abuseHey there. I just wanted to say that I was enjoying this story when I stumbled across it, and read the whole thing in one sitting. I found it very entertaining and was hoping there was more. I know that it has been a few years (more like half a decade) but I did hve to wonder if you had more of this story in print or posted somewhere else, or were planning to eventually release it at some point on here? I tried going to the sites that you had linked on here, but, well, the domain seems to have been offed between then and now.
Kuzy 2006-04-12 ch 13,	abuseI personally like these S/A fics more than the ones where Shinji and Asuka instantly fall in love. I think you did a great job, yet I guese you gave up on this story. I hope you still find time to update this.
Biron Cascadan 2006-04-11 ch 13,	abusePlease! I beg of you! Please update this story! It's been like years since you did... I need this... I am addicted to this story like a pothead is addicted to his weed.
DCWestby 2004-12-24 ch 13,	abuseIt would be nice if you could continue the perdition story.. I like it.
TheGreatHibiki 2003-11-16 ch 1,	abuseStuff now on Fanfiction.net, hope you update soon, Allan.
Allan "ABE" Bryant 2003-03-19 ch 13, anon.	abuseI like how your story has been going since the last i spoke with you. Very very good, so many ideas and twists can come from it. Hope to see more soon. Keep in touch, my e-mail is still on my works at Everything Anime. Ja ne! ~Allan "ABE" Bryant
Autophage 2003-01-25 ch 2,	abuseDamnit! I hate it when things come around full cirlce and turn out to be fun! ... or not... ^_^ Ya got me smiling all the way to the bank LM! I envy such deep understanding of the EVA cast. It takes a lot of patience and thought to entertain with both your words and dialogue, but you've done well! Since it's soooo late, I'll eagerly await chapter 3 when I'm not as tired as 10:18 in the evening can make one. Ja.
Autophage 2003-01-25 ch 1,	abuseTo be honest, I didn't quite understand the hoopla over your story when mentioned at the DS forums, but now that I've tasted a small sample of this story, I'm already beginning see why it was so anticipated. Grammar is flawless, and the paragraphs don't really bug me - How many of us have read a paper novel before? So what's the difference?. The style to your writing is immersive and engenders vivid thought and imagery. I can't wait to read more, o' Archbishop of the swiftly growing A/S religion ^_~ Ja.
lol????lol 2003-01-23 ch 12,	abuseyeah a new chapter, and a promise of a chapter every month. i can't ask for anything better. This was a nice chapter, and you better keep that promise.
Lucky24 2003-01-23 ch 12,	abuseIs this last chapter MMV or APV? I hate reading stuff that is missing scenes, and the swead entertainment site is gone. If this is MMV, where can I find the APV version?
Scott 2002-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseLack of spacing....... massive paragrahps........ the horror!!!!!
Shinji-Ikari-2040 2002-09-10 ch 1,	abuseaaaarrgggggh!!!!!!!!!! words....and...paragraphs....too....big!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Reizig1 2002-07-18 ch 11,	abusebuh
Rion 2002-07-18 ch 11,	abuseAh, good to see another installment of this fic. The interplay between all the characters is superb and especially the Shinji/Asuka interaction which is very cautious, but such is with these two which makes it so realistic. I start to wonder if you haven't been in this position before yourself :P On a technical notice there were a few spelling mistakes I noticed but nothing glaringly obvious. What's got me is the whole Kaji flirting with Rei thing, is there some other personality you're trying to bring out or is it a joke? A mystery indeed. But good work all around I hope to see more in the future, this fic deserves to live and prosper. One finale note, very sneaky and enterprising idea of making different versions - while it requires a little more work on your part it is still has the desired effect. I guess I will have to visit the site to get the whole story because I've been hooked since chapter 1 sigh :P
Behold the Void 2002-07-17 ch 11, anon.	abuseYou are a good writer. I respect someone who wishes to develop their character relationships, not putting out an inferior chapter because of the promptings of the readers.

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