Wow. That'll be cool. Too bad the girl, Kisha dies before she uses her Netnavi.

IO read this from beginning to end just this hour. It's great! A LOT of grammatical and spelling mistakes, but I lovd the plot. Dynamo is my favorite character- followed closesly by Zero. I haven't gotten far enough in X6 to really know Gate yet, but he looks cute and cool.

Youi were bashing X4 earlier- I jsyt have to say that it's my favorite game. Yeah, X sounds like a girl, but... I haven't seen the series and it was the first PS game I'd gotten. ^^U

I wanna read your other styuff, too, so... I'm off to look it up.

really really good! i didn't review for the other chapters before (except maybe one or two) cuz i was on vacation. keep up this good writing!

don't be so ** yourself, i love the fact that someone's writting about lovely little gate. it's ultra hard finding stuff with him in it. i myself have written a story with him in it (too shy to post it though... maybe someday...) so keep up the good work! >^-^

Well, happy upcoming birthday. Actually, I like this fic, I think it's pretty cool and cute. But I don't think putting in an author's note talking about how horrible your life is will add anything to your current popularity, it only looks like an attempt to gain pity from strangers. People hardly review my fics either, but then, I only write to get the storylines out of my head so I can think. Still, if your "friends" abandoned you for no reason, they never really were friends to begin with, and anyone who says you should end it all should take a flying leap. You're a good writer and shouldn't put up with that sort of BS.

Please Please PLEASE!
don't leave and destroy your wonderful works of writen art!
I envy you, you can creat a story and stick to it.
It would be a shame of you left such works to be forgotten.
BladeDancer

yeah, I'm reading it , pretty good