It's totally Yamcha.

I'm so happy that your back! I thought you just forgot about this story or just didn't care for it any more, like so many other authors do with their stories. Anyway love this new chap. it realy was a wonderfull read can't wait for the next one. Hope you don't keep us waiting to long. lol Take care, I know school can be hard at times, but hay that's life!

P.S. PLEASE! DO NOT CHANGE THE NAMES! I like the American names thier COOL!

OMG IT STILL LIVES! Ooh I haven't thought about this story in so long! Holy crap I've been away a long time.

The plot. Oh the plot. I love the plot. LURVE it I say. It's just getting so juicy and my goodness the drama! I missed this one. *tear*

goodness, I have been waiting for this story for nearly two years. im so glad you are back! So then, that said, Update soon!

you really need to update this story more often than every 2-3 years. Unless you just abondoned you readers. when you become a writer you have responsability to your readers to see your stories through to the end.

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Those things you see above where the things I was thinking when I clicked onto this story. This...is...unique. To find a story where Darien/Mamoru is a central figure of a cross-over? Extremely rare. You may want to consider re-doing this fic because:

-Numerous misspellings and grammer problems.

-You are using the horrid American dub with American names. Bad idea. Using japanese names and even better, using manga would make this fic golden.

-Consider adding depth to your plot.

Other than that, I love this.

Wow, sorry I haven't written a review in a while, like you i been busy with school. I really enjoy reading this story and I hope you post the next chapter soon. Until then, take care, and god bless.

PLAESE UPDATE!

Are you still alive or what! I like everyone else have been waiting mounths for a up-date. This story is to good to not keep going. You have to keep writing your a great writer to just stop writing. Please contine on we need this story.

hey excellent keep going im dying to find out what happens.

I LOVE this story it is the best. Making Darien Piccolo's son now that is new. I am surprised that you didn't make Darien one the Saiyas son like Goku he could of been Darien's dad, but Piccolo work it give's your story more drame. LOVE your story up date soon PLEASE!

THis is a great story. What every you do , don't stop until you reach an ending, a lot of good stories stop before the end and that always hurts. maybe in future have love triangle, between marron, serena and darien. Thanks for makeing not such a wimp.

Its been almostayear andahalf since you heard from me. First off,Iwanted to say thanks for answering the questions I ask you on this fanfic, His Path. They sure helped me understand a few of the things that went on in this fanfic. So now, I have more questions to ask you to answer. This time, I am starting where I left off at on question number six. 6. When this fanfic began where was Darien? 7. How did he get there? 8. Why was he there anyway? 9. And he was watching everything that was going on from where he was, right? 10. How is it he is able to see what is going on from where he is? 11. When he was watching the snow & wind hit the Earth, was this happening naturally? Be sure to let me know. And I will have some more questions for you to answer later.

Hi, i hardly see a good Darein story any more. And one where he is the star and x-over wow. . I think that chapter 11 was bit farfetched, but it still good.

It looks it up the great rose throwing hero

Tuxedo Mask to lead his team the trio of coolness. To save the world from the evil

that is in the dbz world.

I like that after hard day of saving the world. He has his cup of coffee[ darein all the

way from the amine] and reading the wall street

journal. superheros must plan for the future.

Jedite is great and funny and Zoycite is great as well.Will kunztie i liked his japanese name better be the practical one and so very proper.

when will nephrinte test darein and what is

kunztie test going to be. as leader of the genreals it will be the hardest.

This is full of humor,romance,serious,,

it just so nice to see darein get a story. And i alwawys thought that darein has little of the devil in him.how about after darein has gotten his traning and he meets serena again. serena finds

out that darein kiss marron. and serena hits on his head. and darein saids i thought that she was

you. and serena forgives and then kiss. and

you have to put vegeta in as well the rest of the

dbz gang in here as well

please update soon

i am laugh and crying as the same time. that

is how good this is

thanks sandra

Please continue, that is all I ask of you.