Beautiful. I love your Kain!

Niiicccccccccceeeee...very good story.

I think that's great!

::Wait a minute for the comments, David is busy dancing around in raptures of fist-waving excitement::

YES!

Oh yes, this is it. This is what a fanfic should be. GOD I wish I'd written this...

You have DEFINITELY sparked David to play through FF4 again...and probably toward fanfics of his own... But one bad deed doesn't invalidate the fact that this story, and its companion, ARE Kain. I'm literally speechless. This is as close to genius as I've seen a fanfic get.

...whatever, dude.

That was frikkin' awesome

Wow, this was really something, FF4/2 fics are as rare as FF6/3 stuff, but this was REALLY good, Kain was my favorite character in the game, and well, you did a real good job potraying him and Rosa. You know, I never did think of that jealousy thing, but it actually works. GREAT job!

This was a good story but Kain was not like that but good Job!