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| Crystal O. Grapher 2005-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, that was really enjoyable! People are in character (with the possible exception of the ever-mercurial Buffy). Good use of The First. Fun. |
| RosieW 2004-11-01 ch 12, | abuseOh my this was excellent! Love how they all complained and whined in their chapters... does this make me weird that I found it funny? I hope so. Anyhow so much enjoyed reading this, the little demon boy was highly amusing and I loved how wishes were granted and stuff. This review is so not as intelligent as it was going to be - so bedtime now. Anyhow wonderful work! |
| CeilingFan 2004-09-18 ch 12, | abuseWhat a great idea! It's nice to have *some* excuse for the endless misery of the last couple years of BtVS. |
| zzilly14 2004-07-15 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! Interesting concept of the whole alternate universe thing. It reminded me of both "Normal Again" and "The Wish." Great job! |
| Leanne8582 2004-02-09 ch 12, | abuseThis was such an amazing story. I loved your connections and possibilities for the Dawn-less world. And I loved your Vengence Demons accounting practices. Very funny. Wonderful job over all. |
| Leanne8582 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuseTotally awesome beginning. I sincerly hope you continue, because I know this is going to be great. |
| nzlaura 2004-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was one of the best fics I've read in a while. I loved the extra detail you went into to explain exactly how vengea- uh, justice demons go about my work (in my head this is now canon). And I thought your characterisation was spot on. Was great how, even though it was Dawn's existance which basically ruined the scoobie's lives, you didn't make this her fault. She got to be a hero - and I had a tear in my eye. Her interaction with the first was hilarious too! Also showed sympathy for Buffy & the others - sure they're screwed up, but so much of that is from the general hellishness of the last few years. Also, lovely to see some happy slayerettes at the end, no worries about it being cheesy - in my head Giles' and Olivia's baby would be called Dawn or Don anyway, so you can't be cheesier than that! Thanks so much for sharing this. |
| Kristi 2003-10-03 ch 9, | abuse That's some fine detail-orientation there, Anne. Splendid worldbuilding. -A |
| Nikitangel 2003-08-25 ch 12, | abuseAwesome story! You really wrote a great piece on a premise that could have turned out hokey in the wrong hands. Thanks! |
| twisgd 2003-07-29 ch 12, | abuseYAY! Giles gets a happy ending. Bout damn time. Thanks for this. Clever AND cute. |
| April5 2003-07-08 ch 12, | abuseoh my god! this story was so cool! i'm not really for the b/s stuff, but hey...i still liked it...make more good stories :) |
| kso 2003-06-16 ch 12, anon. | abusevery interesting concept. i really enjoyed it. thanks! |
| Usako3000 2003-05-29 ch 12, | abuseYay! Dawn doesn't exist! Excellent! Although, I sorta felt for her with her sacrifice. Good kid. Or not. Well interesting story, nice twist! I love Giles being a dad! Yay! |
| woollythinking 2003-05-29 ch 12, | abuseDo you know I'm actually crying here? Cause I so wish this had actually happened. *sigh* |
| HonorH 2003-05-28 ch 12, | abuseMixed feelings here. On one hand, they do deserve their happiness. On the other, it's kind of a pat answer to their Issues, and besides, I'd really like to see Dawn again somehow. That's just me, though. Overall, a good AU, and well-written. |