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| Chris 2003-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. Great character presentation, as usual. Well written, as always. Thanks for posting. |
| Aeryn Alexander 2003-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseThat was a nice bit of closure (something I thought the episode itself lacked). Very touching too. Great story! |
| TripGirl05 2003-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO good! It was touching to see the two of them share a moment, one where both of them need some comforting. I really liked that T'Pol had opened herself in some way to comfort "as humans would," and that for once she didn't come to repremand Trip, unable to see the emotional reasoning of what he had done. Very, VERY good! |
| fanofsmith 2003-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseA beautiful story and very moving. Thanks for a good read :) |
| zealousgirl 2003-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! What a powerful piece of writing. I really liked how you made this seem to be quite a natural thing for T'pol to do. I loved how you described her actions once Trip startled to cry - she tried to do what she had seen others do in the past. Please consider continuing this story, although it does easily stand on its own! Thanks! |
| Reanok 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow I was hoping you would write another story.This one has an emotional punch.I'm glad you had Trip and T'Pol deal with the Cogenitor incident and with something from T'Pol's past.I hope you'll continue writing Trip and T'Pol stories I've missed reading your stories. |
| maci 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so beautiful! What else can I say? Good job! |
| plumtuckered 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you for this, Quills. I was hoping there would be a scene in the show that handled Trip's guilt but alas, it doesn't appear to be on the horizon. I guess that is the great thing about fan fic, huh? This was a beautiful moment between two wonderful characters. Thanks again! |
| Anonymous 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou really built a great intimate moment with this scene. The thoughts running through Tucker's mind were no surprise, but the great way you used T'Pol in your story was refreshing. You maintained her hesitancy about how to deal with humans, yet she offered comfort to him in a way even Archer couldn't, I think. I saw a bit of growth in both characters. |
| kittytrypsin 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice short story. I've read a few tales based on this episode, which I haven't seen yet, but am very much looking forward to. Yours is the nicest, giving Trip the much-needed resolution to his well-intentioned actions. Well done, and thanks. |
| Sujo 2003-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think maybe T'Pol is acting a bit too "human" in your story. Also, there is another story on the Enterprise section of this site called "Consequences". It's been up for a while and I've been following it. . .you might want to change the title of your story, as it is likely only to cause confusion. |