Aweomse poem. You did a great job making the words flow. -Jassi

There's something really fascinating about the relationship (or whatever it may be) between Hojo and Jenova, isn't there? Anyway, great perspective...a grotesque and beautiful poem. I love the way everything flows in this, the traditional language and "adoring" style of poem, as well as the way you repeated 'All will be well'. Like an eerie reassurance... Chilling stuff... o_0

*Stares* Gimme your talant! Sorry... This was amazing! The repetition at the end of each stanza made it even more powerful. Hojo. Jenova. Interesting.

This is good - especially the last two stanzas.

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I love your poems! So descriptive, and the words always have such a nice flow, and sound. Congratulations on another wonderful poem! I might just have to go over to Australia and kidnap you so you can do my poetry assesment for me...Mua ha ha ha ha!
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very nice poem, it flows beautifully and it is a great description of jenova, i picture it more from sephiroth's POV though keep up the good work

Woah... Hojo poems are so scary.. yet I cannot get enough of them! I love this.. it is so creepy.. Hojo subdued by madness at Jenova's feet. very good perspective.. I believe you described what happened to him EXTREMELY well! GREAT job!
Kimmie

Ah...poetry for the insane. This was good. I'm not sure what you're implying about Hojo and Jenova...oo He may be infatuated with her, but do you mean in...that.way? Anyway, excellent job. Fanfiction.net needs more Hojo-centered works.

Well! That was quite good! Sums up what I've been thinking all along...