Reviews for Moments in Time

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Lendra-chan 2006-06-21 ch 8,	abuseHeh, that was pretty cute. I bet you've heard that so many times it's sickening, right? XD Well, I'd have to congratulated Kenshin for his gutsy-ness [funky word] to ask Kaoru to marry him! I find it really intriguing that you dislike Kaoru [you do, don't you?] yet you write this! I respect that! :D I mean, [I] surely don't dislike her, but I respect your tolerace. :3 Anyway! Changing of the subject. I really like what you've done with this side story :3. A nice breath of fresh air for something that's so short and sweet compared to My Life. :) Anyway, I hope you update! -Alendra
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-18 ch 8,	abuseAww..!! This chapter is soo cute!! laughs I can't believe you had Kenshin propose! At first, I didn't think it had anything to do with something like that... (I was thinking something pertaining to ... like... don't know! But something not like that...!) Wow... amazed I loved how you were able to portray Kenshin in this chapter... it gives the reader a sight of how Kenshin looks, especially at Kaoru. ...squeals Anywho! This was a great chapter... (but I guess it was the last, huh?) Well... if it was, good job! ^^ -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-17 ch 7,	abuseThis chapter was... different. It was certainly interesting though, to see it though Kamatari's eyes. It lets you see how he thinks... I like it when stories let you see that. I believe you portrayed Kamatari and his emotions pretty good. (Poor thing, he was so embarassed when he woke up... ^^; ) Anywho.. I'm onto the next chapter. -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-17 ch 6,	abuseAhh... So that does explain what Enishi's motives were (somewhat)... You kind of made him sound really... 'disturbed' (the nicest way I could put it) but, I guess to fit the story, you had to make him fit the mold. However! I am so not criticizing! I love your story. ^^ Keep up the good work. I'm going to the next chapter. ^^ -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-17 ch 5,	abuse...This chapter was pretty unusual and different. Yes, Mr. Katsura sure does sound ... weird! O.O; But, one plus about that was the fact that Kenshin got to ride in his Jaguar! Those cars are beautiful... One question..! Who was the person narrating in the last part? I know the person's name is Sandy (I think...) but I'm not sure how they all fall into place.. Were they all 'friends' of Kenshin at some time during middle school? Well, enough of that. I'm onto the next chapter. -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-14 ch 4,	abuseI knew Hiko wasn't as bad a character as Kenshin thinks he was.. ^^ (Personally, I always liked Hiko. Even if he is extremely unpatient. grin) ...This short chapter was really good, until the end... then it go really depressing... -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-14 ch 3,	abuseYes, I think it was pretty appropriate for Kaoru to have some time herself.. I liked how you were able to portray her... It shows she isn't the cheerful peppy girl she always appears to be. ^^ -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-14 ch 2,	abuseOhh... I think I got the themes... One of them was including Enishi and ... I guess he was at a party when the cops came to raid it? And then Kenshin went home to get chewed out by Uncle Hiko... This must have been after ... Tomoe and his parents died... >< -Saori
Saori Gatsu 2006-04-14 ch 1,	abuseAww... so cute...! I think I like these "Moments in Time" side stories... -Saori
animegurl_23 2004-12-17 ch 8, anon.	abusegrins brightly Kewl... THis is supposed to be read after chapter 36 for "My LIfe" right??
Oyuki 2004-04-21 ch 8,	abusethis chapter gives the reader hope! hehe.
en route 2004-03-30 ch 8,	abuseAW...that was too sweet...
VanyD 2003-11-19 ch 8,	abuseYou are such as amazing writer. When I first started to read My Life I couldn't stop. Your style of writing, your diction, your everything is so great. I read My Life so long ago that reading Moments in time brought up my admiratin for you all over again. I honestly think you have a talent for writing. Readng your fic is like reading a vinette (spelling?). There's no thread connecting everything one after the other in perfect order. It's like thought patterns- vigorous, inconsistent, and yet so... understandable. I really think you should write another fic. To be honest I'm not sure if anything will ever hold a candle to My Life, but it will be good all the same. I'm sorry if that sounds mean, but that's how I feel. My Life is my favorite fic, so I guess I find it hard to see anything that could be better. Keep writting, I'll try to read some more of your stuff when ya write more, BYE! Oh, and can you read my story Good or Bad, and tell me what you think? Criticism is always welcome. I think it's really good, but recently I started to doubt how well it's written. If you have time please read it and review. It's a Kenshin fic! So, yeah, bye...again.
NessieGG 2003-09-15 ch 8,	abuseHey, Fitz-chan. Wow, I just realized that I never reviewed this. I'm an *, sorry! -_-; YAY! jumps for a minute then returns her to sultry state* He proposed! Whe! I was wondering if this would come up... I hope you kind of build up to this in My Life though... Good job! I hope you return fairly soon. I miss your chapters... :( Hurry back, Fitz! Kudos! -GG
tesuka- chan 2003-09-06 ch 8,	abuseAlmost chokes to death HWHAT??! Oh my gollygosh! O.O WOW! Minnie me: she obviously never saw that one coming. WOWE OMIGOSH! Minnie me: O-kay. Since this supposedly saner alter- ego of mine is a bit... illiterate right now, I would just like to say that this has got to be the shortest, yet sweetest chapter I've ever read. So there. I don't know about her... point to "saner" alter- ego GREATGOBBLEDYGOOKY! GOODNESSGRACIOUSGREATBALLSOFFIRE! Minne me: ... I believe we share the same sentiment. bows Please keep writing and I hope that the block on your mind may be pushed off soon! grins weirdly Okay, that is just odd. Keep it up! ja! ^_^

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