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| Kitsuka 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love that story...it is so beutiful...*sniff*. It is so...beutiful. I know I am repeating myself, but it is true. That story is so beutiful, it makes me want to cry. |
| Kitsune Magic 2003-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was really good. And sad too. There was only one small mistake I caught. In this sentence 'The girl who excepted him, past and all.' it should be accepted not excepted. Like I said, very small mistake. I guess with all the essays we've been writing this year in English I've gotten used to catching things like that. And I vote for a sequel if you have time to write it. ^_^ Well I think thats everything I have to say. Ja ne. |
| bitchy brunette 2003-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOh! How depressing. Please let Kaoru get her man back! |
| Crazy Girl Person 2003-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very well written story. I loved it. I can picture Kenshin leaving for fear of his friends' safety. I think a sequel from Kaoru's POV would be great as well. |