That was the most beautiful story I ever heard in my entier life! You have talent. Seymour and Yuna are my favourite couple!

(Did Yuna die?) I think she did. Hey, cool story. I like fics like this one. Keep it up!

I liked it.

And tha'ts saying something, because I usually don't like plain old rewrites f the game with something going on behindthe scesn, but this was really good. Emotiona dn a good ending that amazignly fit the characters.

thanks,a dn no, I can't spell in reiviews, sorry.

-Sob- That Was A Beautiful Story...Very Touching... I Strongly Support The Yuna+Seymour Relationship, Please, Continue To Bring Yuna+Seymour Love To The World Of Fanfiction...I'm Actually Crying...-Sniffle-

*sniffles* That was so sad... poor Yuna, poor Seymour. This is a very good story, very emotional. Normally I dont get emotional over storys or other things involving fictional characters but this is just so sad! I might be this way because I am a large Yuna/Seymour supporter or because I am obsessed with Seymour. (So handsome and sweet too. ;-; Lucky Yuna. Too bad it didnt work out in the game, the Yuna/Seymour relationship was much more complicated and meaningful then Tidus/Yuna.) Anywho, I love your story. Anything that gets me emotional deserves the highest credit! Bravo!

~Hailey~

*sniffles* that was so sad.. but so beautiful.. i loved it. ^_^

WOW. that was a good story... I read it at a enemy/freinds house so he wouldn't bother me... cause we fight too much, but I got into the story A LOT. I told everyone I know that has played FFX about this fanfic cause it is just soo GOOD!

I think this story is totally awesome! I love Seymour, and I will read anything about him. Bit of a problem though. It's not likely that Yuna would love Seymour no matter what he did, and if she did I doubt she would tell even her friends. But, it was still an awesome story! (I have it on my Favorite Places.)

Seymour x Yuna isn't really my thing but this was pretty good. It was quite original and interesting. I don't like Seymour that much but heck, I don't like Yuna either (blame the US voice actress. Lol. I used to like Yuna while I was playing the Japanese version but when I played the English one, sheesh! Hedy Burress' (sp?) voice-acting sucked!) Anyway, enough about that. I liked the last part. I've always been fascinated by Seymour's idea of death. o_0;; Err.. Yeah.. Anyway, keep up those fics coming! ^_~

I'm a big fan of any pairings that are different from the popular pairings(ex: Tidus+Yuna, Auron+Rikku, etc.)
I think you did a great job with this fic.
Keep up the good work!

Now, a Seymour/Yuna is very hard to pull off. And as you say, there is major OOC-ness here. This fic might've worked IC. Perhaps.

The hard thing is not really Seymour (he might've loved her, in his own way) but Yuna - it's pretty clear from the game that any attraction she had to him earlier disappeared as soon as she got a hold of the Jyscal sphere. And that's were it fails - even if Yuna after all loved Seymour after what happened in the game, it would probably be a love that was very mixed with hate. I mean, it wouldn't be as pure as it is in this fic... but I don't know. Just a reader, after all. ^^

Nevertheless it was a good fic, because I love the pairing of Seymour and Yuna and there really should be more fics about them. So, well, keep on writing! ^_^