Wowowo, beautiful story, I dont know why you dont put in Romance Section :S.. But its beautiful. I love the part when Agnes teach Piccolo to dance, is so Cute!

Congratulations. But I dont like the final, too sad UU.

ok! so this did have a beautiful plot however there were points in the story that i had to admit were a little confusing. Maybe in the future if you split this story into chapters _ dont worry people will read your stuff even if their is more than one chapter

OMG, I cried! It was beautiful! Thanks for that great moment.

This story hit me, it seriously made me cry as I read the ending, and as corny as it may sound, it reminded me of how I got my now fiance to open up from his very shy and anti-social nature. It's probably the most well-written love story I have ever read, even if it was about Dragonball Z.

Oh wow. It almost made me cry. And listening to the song made it that much harder not to cry! I uswaly dont like it when Piccolo goes out of charicter but in this one...I dont think i would have liked it if he was any drifent than he was in hear. I love the sunrise, very original. (Sorry cant spell for crap!) Also, I do requests. So you ever want a random pariing go look at the rules. I am realy willing to bend them though for you! I love this story to much not to!

... What a Great .. no ... awesome story. I am a giant piccolo fan so plz make more of your amazing stories ... Sigh ... *Reads it again*

-crying eyes out- That... was... SAD! -cries again- Nice one... keep going! Whe...

THAT WAS A VERY SWEET ROMANCE. I LOVED THE PART WHERE PICCOLO AND AGNES SHARED THEIR FIRST KISS. IT WAS KIND OF HARD TO READ THE SONGS, THOUGH. OH, WELL. GOOD JOB.

Beautifully written, touching, poignant...makes me yearn to be in love and be loved in return.

OMG! Any story that can make me cry that way is a winner in my book! I absolutely LOVED this story!

There is one slight problem. Namekians are asexual.

HEY! I NEVER KNEW THAT SOMEONE WROTE A FIC W/ PICCOLO HAVING A DAUGHTER NAMED MIDORI! LOL! CUZ THATS *ME*! . What a funny coincidence! . that was heartwrenchingly beautiful.

thats a nice story and sad make more storys ok

I liked it even thou it was a bit to romantic for my taste, which almost gave me water work. Which I don't usually do when I read a story like this, but it's differ from any romance stories I've read, so probably it got the best of me.Peace and luv sent to ya! _

That was a beautyful story!The story called "Live"was the best the best story I have ever read.To tell you the truth,I have never cryed during a story but,the story "Live" touched my heart and I couldn't hold the tears back.See my eyes are starting to swell up again!It goes to show yah that I admire Piccolo and have strong feelings for him.SEE YAH!Keep Up The Good Work!_