 Chibi Botan 12/22/08 . chapter 1Everyone's hiding something :)
Well written, I hope you would add more..
hmn, how about the other characters?
"Hn. And people think I’m complicated." |
 thebookhobbit 4/29/08 . chapter 1Love that last line. "Hn. And people think I'm complicated."
It summed up the story very well.
I quite liked the way you portrayed the characters, so different from what we imagine and yet so...well, imaginable. It really makes you think. |
 Anna Jaganshi 10/23/06 . chapter 1Quite. But this is very good, I like how you make Hiei describe them all, he makes it... I don't know... but I like it. :) Awsome one-shot! |
 LunarGuardianPhoenix 8/1/06 . chapter 1That..that was interesting. Interesting made me think..hm... maybe that arn't what we think.
Anyway. Good work! |
 Bluefirefox 4/5/06 . chapter 1 wow.. that was good.. diffent.. |
 Phoenix Flare 9/25/05 . chapter 1love the last lines |
 fiction fan 9/19/04 . chapter 1 now that rocks! and hiei is complicated, but no more than any of the others. |
 Lanie McCoy 5/16/04 . chapter 1Wow...how deep. Excellent work. |
 Kawaii-Kanna 4/27/04 . chapter 1i..love it. |
 Kurokiyasha 2/12/04 . chapter 1This was really fun to read. The whole point of view thing, made it very good. Please write another chapter to it. Or a sequel.
Kuro, |
 jettwolf90 12/25/03 . chapter 1 Hey! That's pretty good! |
 jettwolf90 12/25/03 . chapter 1 Hey! That's pretty good! |
 Baka Gothic Kitsune 12/20/03 . chapter 1Hm... I'm positive that I read this before... I just must not have posted a review. Anywayz, good work!
Baka Gothic Kitsune |
 asian princess 61 9/18/03 . chapter 1 wow... this is good! good job very well written.. who know that the guys were really like this! good job! |
 ArcticFox 8/26/03 . chapter 1 O.O That... was... AWESOME! THAT WAS THE COOLEST STORY I EVER READ! _ |