Wonderful story! Very touching! Keep writing! Please!

well done, round of applause for one well written story, thanks

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ummmmmm... depressing

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Great story. I'll read the next part now...

Hi! Did that review I wrote below seem like a flame? I didn't mean for it to be, I was just speechless! LoL! It's NOT a flame! Your fic weas actually pretty good! I really liked that part about shadows! Oh, I think this is over-rated though. It should only be PG-13 or at the most R! Well, great job! Keep 'em coming! :c)

Awesome!

That was different...Um...

Awwww. This is so sad. I would hate to lose my memory. Think of how disapointing it would be if after you got your memory back, you didn't like the person you used to be, or are...whatever. Gary shouldn't have to go threw this. Weres the paper? Who is filling in? Where are Gary's parents? Don't you think they would be worried about thier son. I'm not bugging, just making suggestions. Alana is a great addition to the story. I wonder if all people who suffer from amnesia get a freind to help them. Just a thought. But in the beginning of the story, didn't you meantion that Alana was a teenager? In the story you make Gary seem as though he is atractesd to her. Or is it just me? Maybe its just me. But she seems kinda young. I'm probly really annoying and I didn't get to say what I wanted. GREAT STORY! Hopefully that caught your attention, if you got bored with the other stuff. Keep writng.

great! continue soon! i'm so totally loving it! i like that the parents are in it. keep up the terrific work! mary, keeper of gary's blush

That was cool! Great job! The conversation about God seemed very realistic! Hehe ! The strangest thing happened to me today. I was at a Fast Food Place and this old, homeless, guy who somewhat resembled Lucius Snow (except that he had a *patch* on his eye!) walked in carrying a newspaper and gloves. He kept looking at the paper and then left without getting food or anything. Then he walked away onto the busy street talking to himself. If only I could have seen the date on the paper! LoL, maybe I'm just a bit too paranoid, you think? Anyways, back to the story! I really liked it! Are you going to continue? I hope so! Please!