This story is really good so far! Lots of ideas and assumptions could be made to keep the readers interest. The chapters are just a tad too short though! Other than that, GREAT story so far. Keep it up!

aw excellent!! though a tadge short!! this looks like the beginingingngingignings of an excellent story (damn typing)! and i love the way sam and jack interact so easily! adn quietly! its different!

This is a really good start so far! I hope that you'll be continuing it! It sounds like it'll be a great story. Quoting Jack, "Sweet!"

-Kara

This is great.
I love the way Sam took charge, i am looking forward to reading more!