 TreacleTart 2001-06-02 . chapter 1 Myth ... truly see the transitory reality here, takes talent to write poetry, & keep up the good work !!! |
 Myth1 2001-01-02 . chapter 1Hi. sorry im not logged in. i loved reading the reviews all of you gave me! thank you so much! uummmmh... who the heck reviewes their own story? i dunno. im just thanking all of you for reviewing!!! |
 Earth Angel 2000-12-29 . chapter 1wow. that was...deep. lupin, rite? remus....i donno. he has this euphoric purity that hovers around him, but it looks like you and me are the only ones who see through it to the insecurity. |
 BekaWashu 2000-12-28 . chapter 1::smiles:: This rocked!!! ::poem on faves.:: I liked this alot! Good work^^ |
 Minuet 2000-12-21 . chapter 1This is pretty good, yanno...:P |
 Quidditch 2000-12-08 . chapter 1so good- amazing actually- few people have actual poetry talent, but you do :) |
 TOPGRRRL 2000-12-08 . chapter 1 oh, kewl! I LUV this! But shouldn't it be, "James in heaven, Peter in hell, REMUS in neither" if it's from Sirius' p.o.v? Think it over, and don't quit writin! |
 Twilight and Silence 2000-12-08 . chapter 1Oh, That is a really good poem! Very well written |
 Mountainside Kilts 2000-12-08 . chapter 1No! Sirius is MY obsession! Sorry, dont listen to that. My other half had to say that. Really, that was excellent! I liked, even though I dont like poetry in general. In other words, that was good, for a subject that I dont like. Ummm.... that's all! |
 Razor Wind, queen of the Serpentana Islands 2000-12-08 . chapter 1 uh.... cool! |
 Anita Skeeter 2000-12-08 . chapter 1This was pretty dang good. Congratulations. |