I totally loved this fanfic. Even though it's short, it's...awesome. Well written, and I loved the finishing line. This is so going on my favorites list.

*mwahahaha* EVILNESS! _ Isn't Muraki just the greatest? *pats Tsuzuki* Don't worry, you're still my favorite, but...MURAKI! He's just so wonderful when he's almost raping Tsuzuki and actually raping Hisoka. *sighs dreamily*

I liked your story, it was REALLY spiffy. (wow, that sounded intellectual! *sweatdrops*)Seriously though, Muraki's introspection was wonderfully in character, and that's hard to do, I know. _ I hope you write more on Yami no Matsuei.

Konnichiwa Chibi-chan! It's been a little while sense I've been here, and WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO MEAN TO MURAKI-SAMA! He just had some... issues growing up, that's all. I must say this was a well-written Angsty little piece, just what I was looking for! You had a couple of gramatical bumps that interuped the mental flow of words every now and then, but other than that it was pretty cool, even if it is a little degrating on Muraki's part... though I think that just my be his goal... anyways, good job, and your fanfic count is up to fifty-four! Not bad at all! Sayonara!

-Marius

Hmm...I think it could be argued whether or not Hisoka's actually a descendant of darkness...I very much so liked the descriptions in your fic. Excellent, very good for a first fic.

We're all immortal...until we die .''

A very good attempt to enter the mind of Muraki!

That was a wonderfully creepy fic! You did a good job with it!