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KanSol 2007-03-12 . chapter 8
Nahh...the last line cheesily clever.
KanSol 2007-03-12 . chapter 7
That was heartbreaking.
KanSol 2007-03-12 . chapter 6
He couldn't place the BLOND hair?! Is he stupid or is it a kid or something. Their little exchange tonight made me sad. Way to go back to square -3, those two. I'm liking the whole vision thing, and I think that I'm accruing the information. I kind of feel like "ahh...I see," but then I'm like, "but there's so many mysteries!" And I don't know how the title fits in so- I'm interested. Yes, indeed I am.
xxTeardropKisses 2006-09-23 . chapter 37
Ah! I TOTALY love, love, love, love, LOVED it!! I mean, wow! You're such a talented writer and I think you've been one of the best, most detailed, authors I have ever read a story of!!

I looveedd your smut scenes! The first one you detailed about, when he came through her window was WOW! It was, just great! Then when the quidditch scene came about and Draco made Cho fall and when he himself fell from the broom and... eh... basically burst... that was so GREAT! I was freaking out!

The mystery/suspense of the story made a great addition as well! With the dreams Harry had had, and how you didn't straight out tell us what had been going on with Draco and what his tasks were all at once. You made it a lot more interesting to read, making us guess what was happening! It wasn't all cliché and predictable! Everything was so original and well thought up!

I didn't really understand that part of Harry being the new 'Lord' thing... so... Godric's 500 year old personality thing was transferred into Harry, his heir, and made him have super powers inside of him? Bleh, I dunno. Oh and I love how you made the past twist and made it so that Salazar Slytherin was actually the 'good guy'. He was trying to stop Godric from killing off the muggleborns! Then you ironically made their descendants ((Voldemort and Harry)) have the same ideas about muggleborns/purebloods but for the opposite reasons. Verry interesting =D.

You did a great job with the romance transitions and how you had Draco/Hermione hook up and how you slowly added more romances into the story like Ginny/Dean and Harry/Cho. I think that was cute! And poor Ron's opinions about Hermione/Draco... he was so happy for Hermione but so sad for himself and torn! That was such a great POV to read from!!

Yes, wel I clearly loved your story and you did such a great job with it!! Fantastic storyline, character personalities (realistic), and descriptions! Like I said before, you're an extremely talented writer and lovely job with the story!!

-Dana (xxTeardropKisses)
fanfreak06 2006-07-13 . chapter 1
wow
sesshomarusdemoness 2006-06-13 . chapter 37
Holy **! BRAVO! I loved this fanfic so much! I loved the ending, hell i loved all of it. This fic goes in my top 20 mental favorite Dracmione fics:D
Red-One1 2006-06-07 . chapter 37
Dude, i loved it! You should so write a new one.. and stuff... Your an amazing writer!
Adainya 2005-11-03 . chapter 37
I LOVED It. I know you wrote this a while ago but just to let you know that people are still reading it. WONDERFUL ending. I am so happy they foud each other again. Oh I want to cry. By the way that is a good thing. Can't wait till another bye.
All things fail 2005-11-01 . chapter 37
Oh my God. I loved your story. I think it is one fanfic that i was truely happy about, and that i was content with the ending. I loved the way you wrote it, and im sad that it is ended, but it doesnt make me wondering, "thats it? what the hell?"
angelic-kuti 2005-09-09 . chapter 37
this is one GRET story. love the plot!
Irisi Nafretari 2005-09-09 . chapter 2
sweet
katlover101 2005-08-01 . chapter 20
hey pretty good so far are they ever gonna get back to gether?
felicia gjo 2005-07-31 . chapter 36
I cannot describe the way this story brought me to tears at the very end D:

It was simply awesome. That's all I can say. Simply awesome (: You did an awesome job with everything, you were true to the books (though I was confused on a couple of things involving the story that weren't in the books, but hey... I'm not complaining xD) And... you even made the lemony stuff awesome. I'm seventeen and I've read some lemon fics, but... they weren't as good as this one- in fact, they were all horrible despite how well they were written. But I can't write lemony crap xP I'm either disgusted or I'm like... all embarrassed and everything xD -laughs hysterically-

Anyhow o.o I made this long enough x3 again, AWESOME JOB. -poofs-
Pippin1177 2005-07-02 . chapter 6
this is really cool! ive been trying to find a story like this for a long time!
deviles_dawter369 2005-06-16 . chapter 8
you shouldn't affend anybody its rated bloody M for gods sake!! if any one has a problem they shouldn't be reading it!! but hay that was a good start.
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