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YokuMiya 6/16/11 . chapter 1
I have one thing to say. Vegeta is NOT as short as u make him seem. As a matter of fact by the time DBZ GT rolls around he's pretty much the same hieght as Goku. And are the way you spell Goku and Bardocks' name the Japanese spellikngs? And I mean Gokus saiyan name. Oh same question applies to Raditz's name.
Afrodite 2/23/04 . chapter 2
I enjoyed the ending-minus the song, but tha'ts alright. I think Vegeta is so cute when he's scheming! I particularly like how you portray his overdramatizations!
Afrodite 2/23/04 . chapter 1
This is too much! I was laughing out loud! I'm happy that the other Saiyans are guest stars in Chuey's Corner-I think they are such an amusing cast! I thought King Bejito's insistence on sitting on a mile-high throne was really funny.
Great idea for a parody-Vegeta's antics are very entertaining!
Ynnep 8/19/03 . chapter 1
Hi Chu my name is Penny Torres and I LOVE YOUR STORYS! I'V RED OMOST ALL OF THIM! YOU ROCK SO HARD! I hope to be cartoonest and i can tell youed be a good one. I wish I knew how to post my storys...most of then star a yaoi Goku and Vegeta and a hypper acteve Piccolo. Oh yah and this story rock!
May-VeggieGirl1 7/25/03 . chapter 2
That was a twist. I was expecting Veggie to have more heart break. I hope you get my email with Chi-Chi, Bulma, Goku and Vegeta pics! _ I found them on w.dragonballz.com
Rissa42 5/25/03 . chapter 2
_ and they all lived happily ever after
Miyanon 5/22/03 . chapter 2
Actually in Japanese you'd still be called Chukita. Cuz they have this system where they have the 'chi' symbol then they'd put a very little 'yu' right after it like a subscript. And that would make a 'chu'. *nods, very proud at her two month's worth of japanese*

ANYWAY, great chapter! I like the ending! Who sings the song at the end? And I love Veggie and his blow darts! And how frank UUbu is when he says Vegeta's hitting on Goku. And Veggie's little ki balloon animals. Oh what the heck, I love all of it!

And your next story sounds really awesome! I can't wait to read it. And did you know your stories are really good anti-depressants? Yeah, I was depressed earlier cuz my best friend won't talk to me and this just made me feel all better!... Well not all, but mostly! I hope that you get this next story up soon!

Sincerely Miyanon
Saiyajin-Neko 5/22/03 . chapter 2
nice one good ending,i cant wait till the next story ja.
Nasiyalog in wasn t possiblegrrr 5/22/03 . chapter 2
I 'luved' this, getting the other Saiyans to your pre-story-talks was a good idea, what about a fic with Goku training Veggie?That would be so cute lol

One thing to criticize: I m not absolutly sure, cuz I suck at math, but I think our maths was wrong, 2/3,5 doesn t equal 5/6 but 4/7, but that s kind of off topic *smirks*
Neon 5/22/03 . chapter 2
LOL! that fic so totally rocked!

i liked the kinto'un and the ki-blast-writing-then-turned-into-a-balloon-animal thing!

i dont like ubuu, the GT screw-ups are all somehow linked to him... *mutters* little brat, moochin' in on veggie's big buddy...

oh well, c ya!
Sputtersparh Sparky 5/21/03 . chapter 2
HAHAHA! that's so good!
kitty8688kitty8688theonly 5/21/03 . chapter 2
all ready a member here. Good story. Is there a chapter 3. I just hope you don't make it G-A-Y thing. With Goku and Vegeta. Anyway, if there is a chapter 3. Make it good. See ya!
Chuquita 5/21/03 . chapter 2
Wow! Hooray for fanfiction.net! Now my fic looks almost-just like I typed it in notepad! (w/the exception of doublespaces in the beginning/end Corners and the Q.O.T.W) Nice add-on whoever thought it up! :D
kitty8688kitty8688theonly 5/20/03 . chapter 1
already a member here. Good story. Make sure you read my stories and review. THANX! Bye!
People Hate Me 5/17/03 . chapter 1
Holy Moosecheese... SQUE! 'Tis a very good story! Better keep UUbu out of Veggie's way Oi... my head aches *rubs her aching head* Well, it's a kawaii li'l story! YOW! *rubs head again 'cause she's got a migrane from eatin' too much sugar*
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