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Luciun Weasley-Ogg 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abuseeven though its not at all cannon anymore this is still one of the saddest most moving stories ive ever read
Aliza P 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. There's really no other word one can use to describe this story... -Aliza
Susan 2006-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseBeautifully written. The characters have changed, but not implausibly; you carry on the story very gracefully. Great writing - I rarely expect to see work of this quality in a fanfiction.
Noubliz 2006-08-24 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was... deep... sad. Bitter, very bitter. Beautiful, too, in its own way. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Rosmerta 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abusePowerful writing ... and a very somber ending to the whole saga. But it's well thought out and certainly plausible, especially Voldemort "punishing" each Order fighter according to their vows to protect The Boy Who Died. I'd love to see a followup where the blind man does tell the scarred woman he loves her!
Nienna Telrunya 2006-04-24 ch 1,	abuseI have read this before, and reviewed it elsewhere, I think, but I cannot stop adoring this story. Yes, it is painful, it is angst. But it is also beautiful.
Kerry 2006-03-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseAbsolutely chilling. You're an excellent writer - I keep on coming back to your work, and, much like I do with Pratchett, see something more in it every time.
Leni 2006-01-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. so much bitterness packed in one solid pounch. And that last lne was a stroke of genius. Wonderful oneshot.
taren 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseall i can say is WOW. you have no idea how long i've been trying to find a story featuring draco as a decent person WITHOUT slash or anythign X-rated. loved it!
Ruby-C-Took 2005-05-07 ch 1,	abuseThis story is amazing. It's so angsty and powerful! Good job!
snackfiend101 2005-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think I'll go cry now. All I can do is echo the words of those who came before me...although very fervently, may I assure you. "We are all punished by the words we speak." How delightfully ironic.
Animus Wyrmis 2005-03-25 ch 1,	abuseWow.
Kaethir 2005-03-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, dear Lord. I'm wiping tears off my face as we speak. That was one of the most beautiful - no, THE most beautiful - post-war story I have ever read. The only thing I didn't particularly appreciate was the whole thing between Harry and Cho...But oh! This sentence will stay with me for ages (quoted and re-quoted and re-re-quoted): We are all punished by the words we speak. The whole concept of The Children was magnificent, as well. -hails- Keep writing. Please, keep writing.
Mistress Siana 2005-02-24 ch 1,	abuseI'm at a loss of words now, honestly. "We are all punished by the words we speak." I know this paragraph was quoted several times before, but it is one of the most toughing and at the same time disturbing things I've ever read in fanfiction. Added to favourites.
Jellyman Squirt 2005-02-08 ch 1,	abuseI can't beleive you can squeeze that much angst into a one-shot that's so well-written. I'm going into terminal depression. I can see your Nightwatch influnces coming in fairly strongly - but you're such a great writer, you shouldn't be allowed to write angst. This paragraph is going to stay with me for a while: And Hermione Granger didn't have much of a face left. At least, that's what he was told. The scars covered most of it. She'd said she'd face Voldemort, see, so he removed it...just as Ron said he would stand with Harry, and Draco said he wasn't blind anymore. Just as Snape and Sirius had said that they were the men who would be the boy's hands. Just as Ginny'd said she had his back, and Fleur promised to fight like a madwoman, and Colin had said he'd go to the ends of the Earth -- because poor Colin can never, ever stop running from the guilt at being the untouched one... Jellyman

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