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Cassandra30
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
Fabulous story!
CSnow
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
wow. most fics end with a happily-ever-after, but that's not really realistic, is it?

very powerful, good choice writing from Draco's POV. I was surprised at Polaris being harry's son with Cho. so tragic, even for the one child.
Edward Evans
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
wow that was really good.

I mean seriously well written, you aim was sad and you succeded avoiding chiche lines that make it seem fake while keeping the characters mostly themselves.

Thank you for writing this.
Mr Stereo1
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
That was deep, totally against cannon, but a brilliant piece of writing nontheless. Well done.
Luciun Weasley-Ogg
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
even though its not at all cannon anymore this is still one of the saddest most moving stories ive ever read
Aliza P
2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Wow.

There's really no other word one can use to describe this story...

-Aliza
Susan
2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. The characters have changed, but not implausibly; you carry on the story very gracefully.

Great writing - I rarely expect to see work of this quality in a fanfiction.
Noubliz
2006-08-24 . chapter 1
Wow. That was... deep... sad. Bitter, very bitter. Beautiful, too, in its own way. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Rosmerta
2006-07-13 . chapter 1
Powerful writing ... and a very somber ending to the whole saga. But it's well thought out and certainly plausible, especially Voldemort "punishing" each Order fighter according to their vows to protect The Boy Who Died. I'd love to see a followup where the blind man does tell the scarred woman he loves her!
Nienna Telrunya
2006-04-24 . chapter 1
I have read this before, and reviewed it elsewhere, I think, but I cannot stop adoring this story. Yes, it is painful, it is angst. But it is also beautiful.
Kerry
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Absolutely chilling. You're an excellent writer - I keep on coming back to your work, and, much like I do with Pratchett, see something more in it every time.
Leni
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
Wow. so much bitterness packed in one solid pounch. And that last lne was a stroke of genius.

Wonderful oneshot.
taren
2005-06-21 . chapter 1
all i can say is WOW. you have no idea how long i've been trying to find a story featuring draco as a decent person WITHOUT slash or anythign X-rated. loved it!
Ruby-C-Took
2005-05-07 . chapter 1
This story is amazing. It's so angsty and powerful! Good job!
snackfiend101
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
I think I'll go cry now.

All I can do is echo the words of those who came before me...although very fervently, may I assure you.

"We are all punished by the words we speak."

How delightfully ironic.
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