peter! poor boy.

great story. keep writing!

I truly am speechless. I could tell you about how wonderful this is, but it would not be sufficient. Breath taking comes to mine, and so does the true meaning of awesome. It is most definitely awe inspiring. But speechless is the best I can come up with. ~ LT

Oh.

I think think of any better way to tell you how gorgeously effective this was than to tell you that the ending -hurt-. Really hurt. Because your Peter is beautifully crafted, weathered, and old, and it all makes so much sense that I didn't need to stop during the piece and think about it, rather watching Peter grow (because he continued to do so, mentally, even after he came back) was an organic process. The whole love-interest-left-behind could been a trainwreck, but somehow it made sense that what Peter would regret most was a woman who suddenly understood him (it seems that your Peter, on the inside, was horribly lonely).

The writing here is perfectly reminiscent of better times--the language is carefully reflective, always passive.

You did a fantastic job. There's nothing more to be said, really.

Very well done. I think Peter's head is hard to get into, but I like how you did it here. Canon character/original character fics are often very scary, but you've handled this one quite well, and made me ache for them both. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Wow. So sad and yet...yeah. I wish I could describe what it made me feel, but I'm not good at describing emotions like this (and I'm an author!). Excellent job.

Wow. I've read few books that have that much and that kind of emotion. An awesome story and one that I could very well imagine happening. Excellent, magnificent writing.
P.S. I hope someday that I can become this good!

Melancholy fic. Very nice writing, poor Peter.

Well written. I always thought it would be a bit of a mind-** to go from adult back to child.

You've given me the ability to feel again through your writing...

Amazing.

This is the most awesome fanfic I've ever read! I love it! I honestly cried over it! So did my roommate! When Peter runs back to teh wardrobe and pounds on the back! Oh my!

*tear* Sort of bittersweet...

Very well written...

and I doubt anyone one would mind if there was a continuation in order...

one can dream.

I really liked this story. It sounded as though CS Lewis himself was writing it.

dang it, why do i always open up angst fics? i always cry! that was pretty darng ood, im crying now, so nice going. write something else, you have amazing poetntial, and when you do, YAY!
Havah

I'm speechless and would be soundless if I weren't sniffing a bit. I may be a harsh critic, but this is raw brilliance. You brought every element into the story carefully - there were no throw-aways, it all worked together to bring the story, and you wrapped it up extremely well. What name should I put on the medal?

This was absolutely fantastic. Very haunting and very real. I'd always wondered if any of them had gotten married or left loved ones behind. This fic shows that poingantly.