well, i liked it. then again, i'm a bit of a nerd xD
i think it's an interesting idea that does make sense wrapped up in a very cute oneshot.

KEEP WRITING!

What an absolutely fascinating story. I don't pretend to understand it, but I know enough to be amazed. Beautifully done!

One of the most brilliant stories I have read in a long, long time.
The mix of Valar, quantum physics and timelessness was nothing short of incredible.
This heads straight to the favourites list. Thanks so much. :)

I like this. Ish very deep and much better than anything I write.
Too much math *wide-eyed* math already blows a couple of my brain cells everyday in school. Evil algebra 2!
Anyways, enough of my ramblings. I liked this and ish now going to leave you in peace.
~Neko Kurai~

*Queen Vaire nods her approval*

The Queen proclaims this a fine work, indeed!

Fluff...certainly not. This is a quite complex and intriguing written work with accurate reference sited in the "Notes" section.

Not to mention that it is wonderfully entertaining.

Bravo!

Whoaw. WOW! This is incredible. Not to mention that I love Mandos to death and I want to take him home with me... Your writing style is impecable. Thank you for sharing this.

This is such a lyrical beautiful piece. The smut is lovely and characterisation of the Valar would be hard to do, yet you have done it so well.

*applauds*

One of the most unusual and fascinating love scenes I've seen in a long time. The imagery works perfectly. Thanks!

That was the most amazing esoteric Tolkien tale I have read Alena.
Whew..the threads like the Fates...and the tapestries and Namo...Whta an amazing imagination you have.
That was really really something.

Okie dokie, you've done the near-impossible: write a wonderful fluff piece that happens to be infested with mathematics.

Such a goregeous piece of writing... with so wonderful descriptions that just enraptured me from the beginning.

Your Valar... are so perfect. Just loved how they connected on so many different levels...

*dies of admiration*

What's this? The Ainulindale played on cosmic strings? Ainur engaging in quantum physic(al)s?
Mandos overcoming the uncertainly principle? Well, whatever - and I'm not sure I get it all - it's a lot more than fluff. A glittering piece of work. I'd never have thought Mandos' POV could be used convincingly, but obviously it can.
Link?

Perfectly gorgeous.

Really nice story. You have a beautiful writing style with such lovely words. I liked this a lot...

I am honestly, completely flummoxed and wordless.

The mathematical allusiuons were so beautiful that they were even comprehensible to a dunce like me.

Ai ... perfect ... and Mados and Vaire...

Why can't I write like this?

this is so wonderful... I dont even know how to begin...

"patterns arise, even in pure chaos.." that sentence almost made me cry, its so perfect... i truly enjoyed all the mathematical metaphores. I have never read something like this...

What a great story about the love of Namo and Vaire. I find really interesting that they choose the forms of the Children in that moment of passion... Really insightful... and somehow appropiate...

Your work made me feel great, in the mathematical aspect as well as in the passional aspect. I am happy someone else thinks its possible :)