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Reviews For: Harry Potter and the New Evil : 8 years out : done - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Olaf74
2008-08-18
ch 1,
abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
DramoSkye
2008-06-25
ch 17,
abuseI liked your first four stories the best. Though this one was pretty good as well.
maanitraj
2008-03-01
ch 1, anon.
abusehey there

i have loved each n every one of your stories
they are among my top favourites
u write superbly man
my fav were the continuous 5 that u wrote
they r awsome
i have read each of them many times
if u gona write any more fics plzz mail me

thanks
Cynthia1850
2007-12-04
ch 17,
abuseExcellent series. Very imaginative and well written.
AustrianShadow
2007-08-16
ch 17,
abuseAloah,

all I can say is WOW.
I've spent the last 3 day's reading your 5 storys and I'm realy impressed by them.
Maybe you'll continue with one more to describe the progress Harry, Hermione and the others will make, especially how they will defeat Percy and Lucius?
And btw, I think you've also mastered the more adult scenes very well and mutch better as many other writers have.
So far for now I'll congratulate for the great work you've done.
cu
Shadow
sdog
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseYour stories are great I just finished the last one!
paulaluv2000
2007-06-20
ch 17,
abuseYou cannot leave the story like this! You must continue!
q.thews
2007-01-28
ch 17,
abuseWell, being an HPHG shipper i can't be completly satisfied, but i realized that this one would and something like that and it was plotted in a reasonable way.
Some thing i really liked in this saga:
- RJ
- a powerful but not godlike Harry
- Kristi, she started being quite annoying but ended quite nice
(maybe a scene with her and not just a mention in this last
installment could have been a good one)
- A not perfect Hermione, sometimes even her could be (really)
wrong.
- the number of characters you juggled, they are more then the
usual.
Ciao!
q.thews
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseOk, i'm being quite silly now... i was very jealous that Ginny and the other Weasley know the 'Hermione Incident' and i don't :-)
Maybe i'm a bit off as i got to bed at 3.40 am ... anly after i was able to finish the 4th story.
Ciao!
Selector
2006-08-13
ch 1,
abuseVery nice
centra228
2006-07-31
ch 17,
abusevery very good i take it there will be more to it as in another story because that would be a weird ending but very good please make a new one
Nights Silhouette
2006-06-30
ch 17,
abuseA great story, keep it up.
Dobbey
2006-04-18
ch 17,
abuseOk, I sort of feel like a bum because I haven't reviewed this series at all until now. I guess I am now going to go back, but first I guess I'll just leave my ending thoughts on your series here...
1.) I think this series was very enjoyable.While I feel like this story is not near as good as the Undead Alliance overall, I feel like this MAY be more of an enjoyable read if you know what I mean.
2.) I like that Harry got so many diffrent women (im a fan of pimp Harry) but it was sort of sad to see SOME of the relationships end and see him waste so much time on these women who did not last.
3.) That said, I ended really liking your H/G ending
4.) The quiditch was one of the best parts of your story. I feel like his sixth year may be my favorite, but only because it had lots of quiditch.
5.)Kristi was awesome. Even though I feel like they were better off as friends I was really sad to see her go because I liked her character so much. That is one of the bad things that happen when you have Harry/multiship. I would've liked to see what happened to her.
6.) I was hopeing that by the end of this story Harry would just quit his crazy lifestyle and only play quiditch. Quiditch seems to make him the happiest.
7.) This was a evil eliffe. You totally set this series up for a possible sequel.

I guess I will go back through your story so I can review and refreash my memory.
Zed of Vesper
2006-01-08
ch 17,
abuseThis is gona be one LONG rewiev since i wana review all your stories in one go now that I finished reading this series.
As usual lets start with what i thought was bad (don't hate me if you don't care just skip this paragraph ok?). In my opinion the most annoying thing was how bad your writing style was in the first story but I am glad that I kept reading it got loads better. Another thing that i didn't like was the way your chars were all of a sudden OC (not to cannon but to your own story) for example I can't see Hermione taking four years to realise how badly she acted. Oh one suggestion use words for numbers (five instead of five) it makes reading a bit more enjoyable. OH and did you have to get rid of the chars you invented? they were good well developped and interesting (RJ and Kristi) I don't understand why you got rid of em it's as if you didn't trust yourself...
Now what was good. First the storyline, it was great to read a more or less original story (ive read so much ff that you get common elements in every story). You had a super powerfull Harry and yet he was not too super powerfull and the way to the top was really hard unlike some other stories. Your writing stile in the last story was actually quite enjoyable you really improved alot!

Mwell thats about it. I wonder if you will be writing anymore? cause I see you have not written since 2004 ...
Queen of Ravenclaw
2005-12-16
ch 17,
abusethis is so good please please tyell me when you write the sequel... and there had better be one. i lvoe this series so much. some how you managed to get independant!Harry with out evil and/or controling dumbledore thank you so much for posting this
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