this is really sighed by ULTIMATEBISSERISME

it makes me happy ^^

Wuhoo! Dogma's awesome!
Write more write more!

Black: Hey! That was kewl! I liked it, especially when Dogma turned into his demon form...

Nikita: *tad freaked out*

(He gets taken over by Anubis)

Anu: *looks at him, and smirks*

Black: ANUIBS!! CALM DOWN!! THERE'S GONNA BE NO FIGHTING!

Anu: *pouts, and turns back into Nikita*

Nikita: Whoa, what happened?

Black: Dude, don't ask...just don't ask...

yo this story is turning out real gooD! plz!update it soon!

Ack! It's been a while. So Kenshin's family's part of the Nomad Wolves, eh? This is getting pretty good. Keep it up.

Black: Kenny might go Battousai again?! Uh-oh!

Nikita: Scary!

Black: that was good, nice and detailed! Can't wait to read more!

Um... I know it's evil of me but I really hope Kenshin sets aside his vow... He's just cool when he's not clinging to the vow

I love it! Please write more soon!

Black: hey, Red, I like the way this is going!

Nikita: yeah, I'm glad Kenshin has a sister! He needs one!

Kenshin: Hey! What's that supposed to mean?! Are you saying I'm mentally unstable?!! HUH?! *going into Battousai mode* ARE YOU?!

Naomi: Whoa, calm down there bucko! Nobody's saying your a psychopath!

Kenshin: *going normal again* Oh, I'm sorry about that, that I am...oro...

Black: NOT AGAIN!

Hey! Great story!! It rocked bunches!! This is KT/Nalia from Suzy's. I hope you write more

Sessha loves it! Although... sessha has a correction... In Japanese, the family name is usually given before the given name; thus, Myojin Yahiko, Sagara Sanosuke, and Himura Kikyou. In America (or Europe, or wherever other than Japan), the names are reversed; given name first, surname last.
This isn't really a correction, just a hint - if you want to stay true to the Japanese theme of anime (RuroKen in particular, since it's set in Japan's Meiji Era, and takes actual historical people [their names are changed, and the events are ofter different] and places them directly into the anime.)
Well! Sessha is being very contemptuous, isn't she? ^^x Anyway, sessha loved your story! Kudasai write more!
~Sessha

hey this story was cool,plz update it soon!^_^

Black: Hey, that was awesome! I loved it! I'm adding it to my favs right now!

Kenshin:(magically appearing) What on Earth am I doing here?

Nikita: Didn't you get the memo? You're a muse now!!

Naomi: Oh, boy, now we've got another...

Black: NIKITA!! Kenshin's not a muse! He's too kewl for that! Besides, you and Naomi are already too much to handle!

Nikita: >.< That was mean!

Naomi: Yeah! >.<

Black: Eh hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe...^.^; Anyway, I have one question, we'd you come up with that song? Its awesome! Gotta go for now, and burn some CD's for my mom's job (I'm getting paid, so yeah) BYE!

Another great chapter. So what's this about Nomad Wolves? And what do they have to do with Kenshin's grandmother? Please update soon. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

This was a pretty good story. I liked the description a lot. Was Kenshin really so tired he didn't think straight when he kissed Kaoru? Seems kinda outta nowhere, but I still like the story.