love it when is the next chapter coming out?

AWESOME! Dude you have to keep writing! I am so surprised that English is not your 1st language... you write in english better than i do... and speak only english... wow. You are amazing! Keep writing this story! :) Ta ta for now~ Update Soon!

I just came across this story. Really nice! Any more coming?

I found this by accident, but I really like it. Are you ever going to update it??

MasqueraderNumberOne

Hi Stoffi!
Also der Prologue ist echt super, total klasse gelungen. Ich überleg mir auch was in Englisch zu schreiben, doch ich will erst meine anderen Sachen zuende kriegen. Werde mir nächste Woche die Chaps dann durchlesen, bin ab morgen nämlich weg. Freu mich schon und bin gespannt.
Viele liebe Grüße, Sil

*sigh* So sweet...

"Are you sure that she is a human girl and no weasel or something like that?", Assaron whispered into Legolas‘ ear.

Em, Is Assaron having eyes, haven´t he? *smile* Why you don not writing again? *still always waiting for the next chapter*

This is so cool! You HAVE to write more!!

'...I guess this small Lady is a demon in disguise, I can‘t believe she slumbered in your arms, looking as peaceful as a child…and now…' thats so funny! And brilliant!! I can't wait to see more!

YOu have to keep on writing!
your stories are great but i wish you could write faster! it's summer isn't it? Plz i want to know wat happens next! ...please~

-Precious

Hi Pferdi!
Tolle Geschichte! Bin mal gespannt, wie Legolas mit dieser Kratzbürste fertig wird!
Aber findest du Legolas' Vater nicht etwas streng? Hmm, naja ich weiß nix über ihn, aber das kommt mir alles etwas übertrieben vor...andererseits passt's auch gut zur Story! ^^;
Ich lass dich einfach mal machen, bis jetzt is ja immer was geniales dabei rausgekommen...
Schreib schnell weiter!
cio, hoellenwauwau

hi stoffpferdchen!

ich bin begeistert von deiner englischen schreibkunst! außerdem ist die geschichte total gut! das ist mal was ganz anderes!!
mach ganz schnell weiter!

ronny

This story deserves the amount of reviews it gets. It really is a brill story and I am loving every chapter of it. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen to the poor girl and whether she will learn to trust Legolas. I hope so. Please keep writing and update soon.

Hallo!
Hey, Legolas und Assaron haben die Kleine endlich in Sicherheit gebracht! Wenn sie dann auch noch irgendwann aufhört, alle zu beißen, wären die Dinge fast perfekt! (Die Kleine weiß ja gar nicht, was ihr entgeht – ICH würde 5 Jahre meines Lebens geben, von Legolas gerettet zu werden... *bg*).
Ich freue mich schon auf das nächste Kapitel. Vielleicht hat das Mädele sich dann endlich beruhigt und einen neuen Namen?
Liebe Grüße,
Salara

what do you mean you cant believe allthese reviews? this is a grreat story, you deserve them! and more! hope you decide to write more stories in English because my german is pitiful and i love your writing..

Love Lamoo

Your story's truly awesome! You have to write more really really son!

Some parts of this story are rather confusing...I don't have any time today to really show you, (Since I am running late already LOL) but just in some of the writing, it's hard to understand. Also, punctuation is somewhat off...but some of this can be understood with english not being your first language. As soon I as I get more time I'll try to help you understand by what I ment lol!

Great chapter..can't wait for more
Toodles!! Musicgrl