Aww.. thats was a really cute fic.
I like the ending the best.
Great fic!

I just wanna cry. That was so beautiful!

Oh, it's too bad you're afraid of storms! You don't know what you're missing! I love lightening and thunder and pouring rain. It's very mystical and raw. It's nature's way of saying, "Hey, you may be able to evolve, but we can still knock you back if you get too arrogant." Anyways, I really enjoyed this take on the new Malfoy family. Silly Draco believes himself to be fearless. Preposterous! ;-) Thanks for the great read!

This is cool. I can't say I relate, because I love thunderstorms, but I'm a writer, and nature inspires me. I'm like Keita, I like to dance in the rain and watch the lightning and listen to the thunder. I am a little afraid of heights, though, but I still climb rock walls and stuff.

Wow. I loved it. This story is both well written and unique. You don't come across stories like that very often.

*WAILS* It was so good. I almost started crying. It's really good.

this is romantic in the deepest sense of the word. and it's true. because Draco hasn't been able to express his fear. and this makes it even purer.

o.o oh cool. me liked!!

AAW THAT WAS SO SWEET! I LOVED IT, IT WAS SO CUTE!

Good one!!
Here are my two Knuts,
Fedilia

I hate irrational fears. I am terrified of vents and pipes for no apparent reason and it is no fun. At least a storm is something to be afraid of... Anyhoo, this was great. You have a very eloquent way of describing things. It makes it very easy to imagine. If that makes sense...? I really liked the end of it though, he's afraid for her. Aww. Great stuff! :D

Hey,
I finally got around to reading that. I'm a little confuzzled, but EW shouldn't have said all that stuff about how it sucks. It doesn't suck I think it's different. It's good.

-Me

Omg, I hate thunderstorms. They freak me out. And everyone always says it is stupid! But I am always scared lightning will hit me... Especially at night. *shivers* Great story, though!

"He was afraied of her." Great line. This was good but i have one comment. If shes that afraied of thunderstorms you would think that she would be to scared to leave her bed but yet you state that she had left her bed and went to a chair near the window. Why would she want to be closer to her fear? Once again in character i salute you!
Great story

~~Caffeine

I liked that. It was sweet and romantic. Great job on the writing and grammer. ^_^ I wish my boyfriend were that romantic... :(