I loved the first Spider-Girl story, and I can already tell I'll love this one as well. One issue that arises is how Mary Jane will explain Peter's return to her friends and family, though.

When do you plan on continuing this story, and how long till it ends?

The story, the dialog, its all so amazing. You should really consider your profession as a writer. Please write another chaptor. I feel as though the story isn't over. Perhaps in the ending, if this is your final Spider-girl story, you should leave it by Harry expressing his feelings for May. Or, if you plan to write a third, which I personally hope you do, perhaps a new villion attacks and you keep us on the edge of our seats, waiting to know what happens next.
Please write a third,

Wow! I've gotta say this story is terrific. The action scenes are amazing. I really hope you continue this soon!

ah! this so soo amazingly good! when is the next 1 comin out? im gunna die of suspense you r an absolutely amazing author!

this is really good update soon!

Excellent battle sequences! Love it!

All bow down to the Cliffie Queen! Please update soon!

Ciao,
Peter Rabid

*stare*

*flail!*

Aiee!

Um... well written as always. But... I'ma go nuts if I wonder 'what next' too much.

Wow! This chapter had me gasping aloud, "Creepy!" As always, your action sequences are vivid and exciting. I don't know that your retorts were quite up to the usual standard this time around, but that could be excused on account of Mayday being under such great duress. Also, it seems that you may run into some timeline issues now that the Goblin has appeared (ie. basing much of this on the movie but changing Harry's age). Just a thought. But otherwise, fantastic addition. I love that you made us feel bad for Ladyhawk's death - and now she's gone!
You and your cliffies - they're pretty much freaking awesome. :D
~Lady Sun

plz update it fast im really looking forward 2 read the full story

This is a really good story. I had to get to the end of the writing before I could review. This is actually very well written and PLEASE update the story. I voted on your poll that I want to read a third Spider Girl fic, but I need to finish this before there can be a third. Anyways, awesome fic.

It is a shame you don't write for marvel, that was great keep up the great work.

THAT WAS Amazing!


I'm loving your work, man! Keep it coming!

Whoa! What an exciting, action-packed chapter! I could hardly pause for breath! I'm very frightened for both Harry and May... not to mention the other Parkers!

Nice job sorry it took so long to review anyway it was great keep up the great work.

Ohh, the suspense, the excitement! Great chapter and unfortunatelly another great cliffhanger. Did you have to kill Ladyhawk? I liked her and felt sorry for her. Please update soon!