I liked that. She really is missing out, big time. I never actually thought of it that way, watching her pine for him on the show. She practically wastes years of her life on Clark. The sad thing is, I don't think Chloe has even been truely happy. No one deserves that, but she's the one brining it on herslef. I wish someone would knock some sense into her. A guy that could love Lana over her, isn't a guy she should waste her time on anyway.

I guess, you can just learn from your mistakes, or, in my case, learn from others as well.

You won't see me in unrequited love anytime soon. lol

Props.

the relationship of those four fits perfectly with my life, and this song fits perfectly too. I'm the Pete. I always will be. You've summed up everything about us and it hits so close to home. I'm gonna be reading this same story for years to come.

...at least, until I finally get to be the Clark. But that's not happening anytime soon. This story is so perfect for me in a way you will never know. thank you.

Hey, that was good. You put a bit more meaning in an otherwise corny and shallow show (that I like). You interpeted the song well. Go you!

hey! I really liked Everything You Want because Vertical Horizon is an awsome band and I think Pete and Chloe would look lovely together. I also really liked the way you portrayed Pete as one of the main characters and not a side kick to Clark. Keep writing Chloe/Pete parings you are so good at it!

stary eyez

this fic is great! pete is written really well, it really shows a different side of him besides the 'loyal jumpy happy immature friend' part of him. chloe is also written really well, i actually sympathized with her in this fic, i usually dislike her immensely.

and now, could i tempt such a great writer as you to write a clana fic now? :D

So beautiful! I love the fic, I love the song it's based on, I love everything about this! Pete's feelings are so real in this. Great job.

That was great! I love the song, and the fic went so perfectly with it.

Aww, poor Pete. Chloe really is just as dense as Clark in the romance department.

"His central vision is focused on Lana, Chloe in his peripheral. So even if Chloe were to try to show him more, it would be a blurry sideline."

I love that line! So great. Aww. You've given me much inspiration for "Chloe, snap out of it!" fics from Pete's side. Great story, Ronnie!