Aw...loved it. Holly in a dress. And this is exactly the thing she would do in this situation if she did like Root. She's an aggressive girl, after all. Going to see if you have more H/R.

i love this! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

AW thats cute. Original too. Keep up the great work!

yay! that's so sweet! love it!

BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint

Oh, I really love it! It was very sweet, and also well written. Please keep writing!

Aw. I don't agree on Holly and Julius fics but this could be an exception. Are you going to continue this? Please?I like it. No really I do!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?! *Heavy breathing* NEW CHAPTER!! STUFF ONE SHOTS, I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! :D

Sorry for the caps, but I love this, and I really want to know what could happen next! :)

holly and root is something id expect from Mage Kitty. And Ive said this oh so many times to her,HOLLY AND ROOT ARE A ** SUCKISH COUPLE!EVIL EVIL!

pLEASE WRITE MORE. i DON'T USUALLY LIKE HOLLY/ROOT PAIRINGS, BUT OCCASSIONALLY YOU GET A REALLY AMAZING ONE. THIS IS ONE OF THEM. HAVE YOU READ HELTER SKELTER BY RUSSIANWOLF7? YOU SHOULD COZ THAT'S ANOTHER GR8 H/R PAIRING.

Omg! I had no idea you published fics up here! I already reviewed your things on your other site, but i feel the need to do so again here.
I LOVE THIS STORY! I highly doubt you are going to, but *please* update soon!

that was great! i can just see it in my head... and i could see foaly doing that too...
excelent fic, awsome writing!
yup, holly and root, the only way to go ;p

Hi,

I thought your story was great. I have to agree with EvilSpirit, Tie Kerl, & chrysgurl.

Luv Taz

great story i think holly and foaly (yeah i know i am weired) are better suited.

Wow...that actually worked.

I mean, the Holly, Root thing. It wasn't too sappy, it was well written, and it was aware of each character's...er...characteristics.(whoo, that was lame.)

Plus, the idea was incredibly original...

I'll feel incredibly stupid if I don't say something constructive, so here it is.

The description was a bit awkward at times. For instance, you added emotions in places where they didn't belong, such as making Holly sit in a chair 'shyly', and adding the word 'and' where it wasn't needed.(same paragraph). Also, you had a few areas where you added commas where thy weren't needed.

Of course, I only notice these things if I'm being incredibly anal-retentive while I read. Thankfully, that doesn't happen often.

Other than those description hiccups, this was a great fic.

Um. I've run out of things to say, so I'll just have to give you the island native salute.

*thousands of loinclothed island native march in, hooting wildly, then fall to their knees and bow down in awe. Island...ish drum music plays. HOO - HAH!*

~PyRo

Oh yes, and this is the space where I beg you to review my fic, The Dementia Complex.

*begs*

:):)