 anon 2/15/11 . chapter 1 I laugh, but really... Root, fancy Holly? What a dirty old man! She's what, 100, and he's 634? And Holly would never ever do that. Never. Ever. Never. Ever. Never. Ever. Never... *clicks fingers and snaps out of never ever loop*. Seriously, though. From, THE LLAMA WHO HAS NO ACCOUNT |
 Kitsune Heart 10/1/09 . chapter 1Aw...loved it. Holly in a dress. And this is exactly the thing she would do in this situation if she did like Root. She's an aggressive girl, after all. Going to see if you have more H/R. |
 Savvyjewel 8/31/08 . chapter 1i love this! PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
 Naked Revenge 10/14/06 . chapter 1AW thats cute. Original too. Keep up the great work! |
 hollybridgetpeppermint 5/25/06 . chapter 1yay! that's so sweet! love it!
BANZAI!
hollybridgetpeppermint |
 By Grace Alone 5/10/06 . chapter 1Oh, I really love it! It was very sweet, and also well written. Please keep writing! |
 AFfan 1/6/06 . chapter 1 Aw. I don't agree on Holly and Julius fics but this could be an exception. Are you going to continue this? Please?I like it. No really I do! |
 Aryelweb from Fictionpress 12/16/05 . chapter 1 WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? *Heavy breathing* NEW CHAPTER! STUFF ONE SHOTS, I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! :D
Sorry for the caps, but I love this, and I really want to know what could happen next! :) |
 Aura of Chaos 6/10/05 . chapter 1holly and root is something id expect from Mage Kitty. And Ive said this oh so many times to her,HOLLY AND ROOT ARE A FUCKING SUCKISH COUPLE!EVIL EVIL! |
 VanityBlue 8/5/04 . chapter 1pLEASE WRITE MORE. i DON'T USUALLY LIKE HOLLY/ROOT PAIRINGS, BUT OCCASSIONALLY YOU GET A REALLY AMAZING ONE. THIS IS ONE OF THEM. HAVE YOU READ HELTER SKELTER BY RUSSIANWOLF7? YOU SHOULD COZ THAT'S ANOTHER GR8 H/R PAIRING. |
 RussianWolf7 4/21/04 . chapter 1Omg! I had no idea you published fics up here! I already reviewed your things on your other site, but i feel the need to do so again here.
I LOVE THIS STORY! I highly doubt you are going to, but *please* update soon! |
 isadora quagmire 1/19/04 . chapter 1that was great! i can just see it in my head... and i could see foaly doing that too...
excelent fic, awsome writing!
yup, holly and root, the only way to go ;p |
 TazMoon 8/24/03 . chapter 1Hi,
I thought your story was great. I have to agree with EvilSpirit, Tie Kerl, & chrysgurl.
Luv Taz |
 beckie13 7/22/03 . chapter 1great story i think holly and foaly (yeah i know i am weired) are better suited. |
 PyRo4 7/5/03 . chapter 1Wow...that actually worked.
I mean, the Holly, Root thing. It wasn't too sappy, it was well written, and it was aware of each character's...er...characteristics.(whoo, that was lame.)
Plus, the idea was incredibly original...
I'll feel incredibly stupid if I don't say something constructive, so here it is.
The description was a bit awkward at times. For instance, you added emotions in places where they didn't belong, such as making Holly sit in a chair 'shyly', and adding the word 'and' where it wasn't needed.(same paragraph). Also, you had a few areas where you added commas where thy weren't needed.
Of course, I only notice these things if I'm being incredibly anal-retentive while I read. Thankfully, that doesn't happen often.
Other than those description hiccups, this was a great fic.
Um. I've run out of things to say, so I'll just have to give you the island native salute.
*thousands of loinclothed island native march in, hooting wildly, then fall to their knees and bow down in awe. Island...ish drum music plays. HOO - HAH!*
PyRo
Oh yes, and this is the space where I beg you to review my fic, The Dementia Complex.
*begs* |