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| Joey15 2005-02-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseTerrific story, can't wait to read more |
| lanna710 2004-05-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! |
| i-hate-beeky 2003-12-10 ch 3,  | abuseReally love your story, want to hear more. You just might not want to use the same word 20 times. Instead of say, "Joey looked from Dawson, to Jason, then back to Dawson. Her eyes then wandered over to Jason." you could say "Joey's eyes wandered from Dawson, to Jason, back to her husband. Then again back to her sleeping son." Or whatever. One more thing, at the hospital it says Jack and Doug were holding Emma, is that supposed to be Amy, or did i miss something. Other than that it's great. -I-hate-beeky |
| Rachel 2003-07-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseDawson and Joey should have ended up together damn those writers! lol awesome story! |
| Maria14 2003-05-30 ch 3, | abusereally good, continue!! |
| Angel Eyes9 2003-05-29 ch 3, | abuseHey There Great story finally someone who agree with me that Dawson & Joey should've been the ones who ended up together at the series Finale. Anyway I really love your story you are a very smart and talented writer please keep up the good work and I was wondering do you think you can keep posted when you update your chapter please because I really love this story I can hardly wait to read the next one. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Joey and & Dawson Will have another baby in this story wellt ake care |
| Lsbabygirl 2003-05-27 ch 2, | abuseAw. This story is so cute. I just LOVE D/J. I've never been a huge P/A fan, but they're cute too. Look forward to seeing what else happens. |
| joeylovesdawson 2003-05-26 ch 2, | abuseI also thought Dawson and Joey should be together. This is really good so far, I'm anxious to read more. |
| signs fan 2003-05-24 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter rocked.I can't wait to see what's gonna happen in the next one. |
| signs fan 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this.I wanted joey and dawson to end up together and i'm a huge pacey/andie fan.I think this is really cute.Keep up the good work. |
| Maya3 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseit's a really great start to a really great story. Keep it up. I really hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. |