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Miruial
2006-08-13 . chapter 2
LOL! I love the... um... dialogue between you and the elves at the end! You should do that more often! :)
Silvarn Peredhil
2004-09-08 . chapter 2
Hello lovey, it's silvarn, the long lost and rather lazy writer ^_^. Wow this is my first review in a long time isn't it? Well you still have your old magic of comedy my dear and I quite enjoy this story so far! Good luck and keep on writing!

~Tiruvantel ar varyuvantel i valar tielyanna nu vilya~
Elf of Sirannon
2004-08-03 . chapter 2
The stories the 3 lords are telling about Earendil are really cute. I love the image of him on his "grass skimmer". Does he sit on it or or stand? Is this meant to be an early version of the skateboard? Now I'm imagining Earendil skating through the streets of Gondolin, a la Bart Simpson. I like that correlation, lol.

These boys are really cheeky, writing The Worst Song Ever Composed just to annoy the King. There's a touch of Hitchiker's Guide To The Galaxy in that - have you read that series? The name The Worst Song Ever Composed just seems to be in the style of that series of books.

pmsl. Tell those naughty Elves to behave themselves; if they disrespect you too much they just may find themselves in the midst of another terrible and extremely humiliating situation.
Elf of Sirannon
2004-08-03 . chapter 1
Hello, it's me back again with my story-by-story chronological review. I meant to tell you in my last review of A Yuletide Tale that you made me cry, but I pressed the submit review button before I could post that comment - so I just wanted you to know you made me cry. Bad Tree! (Or is that good Tree? Coz a good writer gets their audience emotional...moving on).

lol - I like all these bets. I think I understand the title "It Runs In The Family". Is that a reference to the tendency of both houses to place a little bet now and then? Tell you the truth, I'm a bit concerned about this compulsive gambling habit. I hope Elrond and Thranduil don't bankrupt each other. (Although if you got Elrond to wager Vilya, that would be funny. Very AU and OOC but funny).

Oh they didn't do that to poor Erestor...! Naughty young Elves.
aloofelf
2004-04-26 . chapter 2
I love your stories so much! You're an excellent writer! I wonder what Elrond and Elros were like when they were little... then again it's not hard to imagine how they were like when they have a father like Earendil and Elrond's sons Elladan and Elrohir. Please update soon! =)
Amlee
2004-03-30 . chapter 2
Your stories are great, but they are lonely half finished. :( Please update them!
Jazmin3 Firewing
2004-02-12 . chapter 2
Nice one! Very funny chapter, although the update was rather long in coming!
sabercrazy (too lazy to login)
2003-11-28 . chapter 2
*snort*
Oh my poor Glorfindel...
*falls out of chair laughing hysterically*
OMG! Earendil is a little demon!! I LOVE IT!
amlugwen
2003-11-24 . chapter 2
whe! finally there is anything to read from you again! :-D! - and this story is absolutely... hm SUPERFUNNYSWEET! *g* i almost feel sorry for the three... but i only will when i know what little Earendil is going to do to them *smirk*

... what are you waiting for? get your elves back! write more!! :-) ok, i am egoistic ^-^ but well... i mean ... others may want more too...
Venyatuima
2003-11-22 . chapter 2
Hehehe!! I must say I quite agree with Tanglinna there ^.~
Hehe, Earendil sounds worse than the Tricksy Trio, if that's possible. I pity poor Glorfindel, he's had to live with Earendil, the Tricksy Trio and the El twins ...
Well, yes, write swiftly or I shall have to employ a Balrog's help to encourage you ^.~ although i suppose good things take time ... lol, well i love this story as i do all your others!!
aurora
2003-11-18 . chapter 2
hey tree

great story it seems that all grown up elves were as bad as the tricksy trio when they were young i guess u couldn't write some tales of when they were young so the boys can have a laugh and poke fun at the "grown ups"
Dis Thrainsdotter
2003-11-15 . chapter 2
It does sound as if EƤrendil is as good at pranks as the Tricksy Trio and the Twins. And it sounds as if he has made somee quite good tricks already. I wonder how old he is in this story.
the evil witch queen
2003-11-14 . chapter 2
hehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehe! ok, i can't stop laughing now! oh,they are going to have a very long day aren't they? i love earendil's 'icy pond'! oh, more, please, they'll never get the hang of skating, will they?

'Glorfindel sneezed as he entered the room. Powder flew everywhere as Earendil 'skated' expertly about his 'pond' and jumped up and down in delight as he had three fine companions for the day.'

oh, do expand on that first sentence! expand on the who paragraph. earendil trying to teach the three elf lords to skate and failing!

i just had a wicked thought, earendil could run off and hide and glorfy and his friends can't find him! hehehehe!

or, earendil leads them on a wild goose chase, continually running off so they have to follow and going into places where dignified elf lords should never be forced to go and makeing them do things they should never be forced to do.
such as crawling through tiny tunnels and doing assult corses blindfold!

well, you're going to have some trouble after telling legolas, tavor, brethil and tanglinna to go away!
well, never mind, keep up the good work! i can't wait for the next update!

my little legolas fic should be updated soon seeing as i don't have much homework, i just need to turn it into a html thingy and post it.
Gwilwileth of Imladris
2003-11-14 . chapter 2
Mae Govannen Tree!

Lol you rule! Wonderful job. Don't worry the Tricksy Trio, and the Master Archer will return. After all if they don't then their popularity goes down and they won't stand for that.

Tanglinna: She's got a point there.

Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier, my computer at home is acting weird. So I'm reviewing at school,evil child I am yes? lol

Keep up the good work, I love this story * is envious of your superior writting skills *lol that's a good thing. ^.^

Namaarie.

Katie
Erestor
2003-11-13 . chapter 2
Glorfindel is great! And so are all those other Elves too, of course.

That was a very funny chapter. *chuckle* I felt very sorry for those birds and trees. They'll probably never be the same again.

What wonderful writing! What a great writer you are!

Yours,
Erestor, Elvish Advisor
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