That is So SAD! He didn't even know her name! Wonderful Job, truly heart-wrenching.

Incredible... really, really incredible.

That was _excellent_. Well written and unique and intriguing and sad! Nice job! =D
~Lydia

This is so sad and so good! I have tears in my eyes. This is a great piece of writing, even though it's depressing. Three cheers and two thumbs up!

Yeah! No fluffy ending!
Depressing but very well written.

Ok now I'm depressed! Can't he magically come back to life?? But very good! Nice job as always!

:O Damn girl! That was good! Had reading faster than I should cos I got drawn into it! Very well written and I don't think it's like any of the other assasin stories around at the mo! Well done!
~etcetera-cat

I loved i t! I have a thing for dark and unhappy (and Jadrek). Please continue it! I dunno, have them both be reborn and meet again or something!

Well that was pretty depressing :P
but I still enjoyed it, well done...
though part of me thinks that mabey it should have had a good ending... I mean I know is gets boring with fiction always ending happly.. but isn't that sumtimes the point ?... that the characters no matter how hard they suffer usually get a second chance. ( rethinking that statment in light of some of lackeys stories) :P
thanks...

oh. . .
good. definitely good. SAD. now i'm sad. . . kinda spooky. in a good way. you're a really good writer. just so you know

O.O Wow...incredible...