 Xinta Kitsune 2003-09-22 . chapter 3UPDATE DAMN YOU! UPDATE! If I have to tell you to many more times..I'll just hunt you donw and kill ya and ifnish the fic myself...*ahem* No not realy but you BETTER update REALLY SOON if ya know what's good for ya!! |
 GoldenSunSheba 2003-08-26 . chapter 3GSS: No chaos/KOS-MOS *Sniffle* I like the couple oh well keep up this story I want to see what happens
Sheaira: Isn't it a little abviose that chaos like KOS-MOS cause when they where in her dream state and he was talking to Nephilim and chaos said that KOS-MOS meant a lot to Shion and Nephilim said 'to you as well' and there was a long pause...
GSS: Ingnor her she crazy anyways...wait you said in chaos' dream there were five of them...then where was KOS-MOS if that was Kaze?
Sheaira: We are so picky about KOS-MOS and chaos I think we should leave now
GSS: Yes a plz explain PLZ!
*waves to fan witch do not care cause they are fans that blow air*
GSS: GR |
 Ryo_Bunny 2003-08-21 . chapter 3 please make more chappys, please? great fic! |
 Crimson Snow 2003-08-08 . chapter 3darn it, i thought it would be chaos/KOS-MOS *sigh*... |
 Ryo_Bunny 2003-07-13 . chapter 3 Wow, great fic!please continue! |
 IkuiTenshi 2003-06-15 . chapter 3I don't think my review showed up for this chapter. Sorry. Well I hope you continue because you are a really good author! |
 renderedvoice 2003-06-07 . chapter 2Wow! This is such a wonderful fic! You're a great writer! I love chaos, so I was ecstatic when I found this fic. Is it just me or are there chaos/KOS-MOS hints in this? *grins stupidly* Anyway, update soon! Must have more! |
 IkuiTenshi 2003-06-06 . chapter 2Yay! A fic on the lovable chaos! Please continue! This is really good. Just a question, do you like the couple chaos and KOS-MOS? Just wondering. Ja ne! |
 Angel-chan2 2003-06-02 . chapter 2Nice! You finally continued! ^_^ Good job so far! Please continue! |
 Dark Angel65 2003-05-30 . chapter 1it's very good i really like it keep up the great writing! |
 Lord Cirenmas 2003-05-28 . chapter 1 Looks Good. |
 Simply Crisis 2003-05-24 . chapter 1this is good so far i hope you write more soon
you,d better plz falls to her knees
and gives puppy eyes anyways you doing great
please continue for all of the reviewers
out there who will love your story when
they read it. |
 Kei-kun 2003-05-23 . chapter 1 So far this is a good story. Please get the next chapter up as soon as you can. |
 Angel-chan 2003-05-21 . chapter 1 Hey, it's me again. Might I make a little suggestion in terms of your writing style? No, this is not a flame, it's constructive criticism. Well, anyways, might I recommend that you keep your tenses consistent? For instance, if you start telling the story in past tense, then stick to that, rather than alternating between past tense and present tense, especially in the beginning of the story. I come across that a lot. It really bugs me.
Once you've improved on that small, itsy-bitsy little aspect, then your writing style is pretty much perfect! No spelling errors, and no other grammar errors to my knowledge...
WHY IS IT THAT NO ONE ELSE REVIEWED THIS FIC, ANYWAYS?!!?!! Do they, like, not like chaos or something?! (frankly, how can one NOT like him?!) Please continue it regardless. *tackles chaos and hugs him tightly* Ah, chaos! ^_^ |
 Angel-chan2 2003-05-19 . chapter 1Oh, finally, a chaos-centered fic! ^_^ *hugs the ever-lovable chaos* Please continue! ^_^V |