You ABANDONED this! And its one of the only reincarnation fics I've read and liked!~ You have a wonderfully relieing writing style, and it was a joy to read this! Most people now dont even bother with paragraphing or correct spelling, and I miss good fics like this, so get yer arse moving before I sic Ashitare on ya!
Oh, and I think it'd be best if he were a reincarnation, but fics are So much more fun if you just have new charries. And what about Aki?
~otaku~

You ABANDONED this! And its one of the only reincarnation fics I've read and liked!~ You have a wonderfully relieing writing style, and it was a joy to read this! Most people now dont even bother with paragraphing or correct spelling, and I miss good fics like this, so get yer arse moving before I sic Ashitare on ya!
Oh, and I think it'd be best if he were a reincarnation, but fics are So much more fun if you just have new charries. And what about Aki?
~otaku~

This is just excellent! :D:D The suspense and the humor is so well done-you've engaged my emotions to their fullest.

The plot possibilities are tremendous for both worlds, and I'm excited to see that you're going to do reincarnations as well! :D As far as Kazuo is concerned...IMHO, his demeanor seems like one of a ordinary person, (and not a very nice person at that), not a seishi.

I'd say the boy that dropped out of the tree seems more seishi-like in his actions...^_^ However, that's just my opinion. I think you should follow what your own muse tells you to do.

This was a wonderfully written, entertaining chapter! I look forward to reading the next! :D

Very best wishes,
KittyLynne:D

that was kinda creepy but it was a good chppie

You have a good start here, but to have kept your readers completely interested, you should have made it longer for the first chapter. Kinda like fishing, if you think about it...Anyway, I'd like to see where you plan to go with this!

Wai! It's rather short, yeah, but good. I like! Please update it soon!

This is a wonderful start to a fic. I find myself drawn to fics told from the point of a child...perhaps because I am a mom, I don't know.

Anyway, I hope you continue this story...it and your writing definitely have potential. ^_^

Best wishes,
KittyLynne:)