Omg, totally loved this story. Didn't think I would, with the whole, Buffy having a child thing, but it was really good! I especially loved how you wrote angel, not a complete ass which is typical in every other fic out there, but as he kinda actually is. Great job!

And so it ends.

Thank you.

It's been a very enjoyable ride - you write both Spike and Buffy amazingly well, and the voices and language for both of them were spot on. Thank you again for a great read.

Wow... that was an intense, powerful scene. Loved it. So much. Now I'm on to the next chapter, because it's needed...

Oh wow, this is a pretty insane situation... loved the ribs you made at Angel, so perfectly worded.

Dear Gods, I can so totally imagine Andrew writing Harry Potter fanfiction. Marvellous little interlude here, I like how Spike and Buffy managed to work things out over Angel, at least for the time being. Can't wait for more.

Oh wow.

That's evil.

And totally awesome. Spike telling that story to all of them was a great nod to canon, and I love what ended up happening afterwards. And now with Angel in there as well... can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow, I never thought about that. I personally think it would be fascinating to see an author get up alongside all the usuals. Loved the humour in this chapter. :D

Loved the domestic feel in this chapter. Absolutely adored it.

Heh, Willow and Spike's friendship in this story is very, very cool and very, very cute. And I love how you've emphasised Spike's willingness/unwillingness. Very cute indeed, can't wait for more!

And so the writer's block breakage comes. I love the fact that Spike's a music fanatic in this one, and so's Buffy. Brilliant.

Loved Buffy's psychoanalysis and the 'Mom hair' quote. As well as William's uncertainty. But just out of curiosity... I could swear that you said William's mother had died in the first or second chapter...

Anyway, great chapter, and I'm looking forwards to more!

The way you painted these scenes was wonderful. I can so see Buffy making herself one of them in such a short time, and the banter between all of them and Buffy's own insights were fantastic. Thanks for another great chapter, and I'm looking forwards to more!

Wow, this redone and yet also cannon Giles was very interesting. And I loved the way you did Anya - it was her all the way.

You have a talent for great, memorable lines. Love it. Not to mention the bonding here as well... great work. Now on to the next chapter!

Heh. And Spike and Buffy meet properly. And the nickname sticks. Heh. I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for more. :D