Loved this story too. Keep up the good work!

You do Caleb so well, it's scary...

As always, beautiful work. I like the little twist to the tryptych at the end, throwing in Caleb's point of view. It was a nice touch and a good way to provide some "outside" insight to the scene. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Hi. MAGNIFICENT! Write more Soon!

This is a thing of beauty. Talk about capturing the voice of the characters.

And I love the ... structure! And the rumination at the end, about what's really the "big" picture. An excellent question. I guess we'll know in a few hours!

Thanks. I'm adding you to my Favorite Authors list.