Awesome-possum. I love it. ^ ^ Thank you for writing!
~Latni-chan~

Overall it was good. but you made a few minor mistakes

1.Phantom is a Musical and not an opera (many people are confused about that)
2. it's spelled "Raoul" and not "Raul"

i'm not saying it to be rude, i'm just pointing things out.

I G I like this story even better for reading it the second time around. It made me realise how the Dead Zone characters and relationship arcs are so firmly rooted in good old-fashioned tear jerking melodrama - just like Phantom! This has to be the secret of Phantom's success. The "softly chomping" line still gives me a serious case of the giggles.
Are you going to do more? I also particularly liked the moments of humour - for example, I would have like to know WHAT comment Johnny made about red-headed reporters...and maybe what Dana has to say about blonde-haired psychics? Also, do you think Dana's feelings for Johnny are doomed to be unrequited? That would be VERY "Andrew LLoyd Webber"! Hey, never mind a Dead Zone video game - how about you and me write a Dead Zone OPERA?
Loved it. Please write more, soon!